|Reviews for When Darkness Sings|
| ForceofGreed chapter 22 . 3/9
Just keep expounding upon your system of magic. Excellent story. It's not really slow, it's just a building thriller. Keep it up.
| SabakuMoon chapter 22 . 3/3
This is amazing to read. Original plot that holds the attention. Please update soon.
| thebellowingpixie chapter 22 . 2/28
I love reading your story. Anything you decide to write I'm going to love so feel free to do whatever I liked seeing things from Sirius' pov this chapter so more of that would be cool. Thanks for writing!
| teedub chapter 22 . 2/24
i would be interested in learning more about harry's voice, or lack thereof. also would like to know what DD's endgame is or why he does the things he does. Oh yeah, and Julian and how he missed the abuse in harry when he was working so closely with him.
but, even if you don't touch upon these things, the biggest is obviously what the heck is going on with the demon-thing.
This is a fantastic story and I am really enjoying the relationship between hadrian and tom.
| teedub chapter 11 . 2/24
great story so far...i'm not sure i like the figg's. they are all too willing to condone child abuse. they must be DD supports as that seems to be is MO.
I am intensely curious about the event with Marge and this current monster chasing the kids.
| Hortensia chapter 2 . 2/23
Interesting story, looking forward to reading more.
| MissySelenity chapter 22 . 2/21
Love the story!
| ubriu chapter 5 . 2/21
4 july is an american holiday...
| nt52 chapter 1 . 2/20
OMG! Love ur story! So mysterious can't with for the next chapter:D Btw will this be a slash? I hope it would!
| susi-san chapter 22 . 2/19
Hello, he did not speak English but I have been reading your fanfinc and I am charmed with it. With regard to a bit of inspiration I you present the following ones:
1) A chapter from Tom's sight on having been enclosed in the diary and the interaction with Adriano, yes, is of it in a chapter but one wanted more complete especially the gradual change of his mentality as it knows Adri.
2) Also it can be an explanation with narrating witness of the things that it did albus this night, if it is that one can, if much is going to compromise of the plot do not put it.
3) Do not do specified if bellatrix mad this one or only it was the condition of his gentleman the one that I take to this condition, the light not always mean badly ... justificaria his actions for a charm or a conjuration that I force her or control her to do it ... you do not have to do it, but opinion is me.
4) the day of the fire Is confused, you do not give us tracks of what can be, only you say that it brought something bad, but the rooms of blood should not have allowed an interference without attacking.
5) I Believe that there is a mistake in some part, refer to Vernon, you say that Dudley it was feeling better later that Adriano went away, but also you affirm later that it became violent, but there is no justification of this violent attitude if rooms continue working and the bad thing is chasing Adri.
6) With regard to the sr. Fing, this obliviatte? It is very strange that was not realizing the mistreatment though it was small, being teacher and the form since you her write she does not look like a person who spends this type of things for high place.
7) It of Adriano's voice continues being a mystery that has me puzzled ... not that to think, but I like much the plot especially the stubbornness of the family Evans.
8) To explain better the scope of Petunia or the family Evans, if it is a secret dedido to since you do the plot ... do not say it... (w)
| evenstarlily chapter 22 . 2/19
Omg, I love the story.. it is just so intriguing that you keep wanting and waiting for more! :)
| MoonPrincess623 chapter 22 . 2/19
I think this chapter is adorable. I love how different you have made the characters, yet kept almost all attached (you can't have the entire canon character because different things are happening).
I want to read more about Severus, HarryxTom! Draco...how can we leave him out? I like the mentor thing going on, and will love it even better when it develops. TTFN,
| DreamKaskade chapter 22 . 2/19
Ooohhhh I'm so excited for the next chap now. I hope Sirius doesn't die hehehe
| angelaneahwalker chapter 22 . 2/19
| gemava chapter 22 . 2/18
i would like to see some more spiders attracted to harry. or even magical varieties. he did have that spider the size of a dinner plate in his cupboard that attacked vernon. but the only magical spider ive heard of is the acromantuala in the books/movies. not sure if there could be more though. i have wondered if there could be a snake like creature attraced to him as well (cocktrice, drake, wyrm, dragon, runespoor, chimera etc) or just so he can have the whole dark, misunderstood, light animal 'collection' how about a pheonix that isnt fawkes? if only to see poor fawkes have a crush. i cant even begin to think about how that birds stays with him for so long.