Reviews for A Test of Character
iLeenOnTheWall chapter 1 . 4/3
Plunge the blade through my heart, why don't you.

Despite my broken emotions, I applaud you for an AU well done. I love it when AU's are still able to capture the core of the character's nature, or in this case, characters' natures.
HatethePlayer-NevertheGame chapter 1 . 12/8/2016
Oh my God this is so sad! I really feel like crying from this tragic undertaking, too loyal to let his brother in all but blood die, but too loyal to fight his friends even if it kills him!
For some reason, despite all the tweaking, I can see Luffy acting like that.
Awesome. I must repeat: awesome.
Bye
Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2016
It's wonderful - K
AnimexXxGoddess chapter 1 . 8/20/2016
WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS

WHY

MY HEART CAN'T TAKE THIS

I wish there was a sequel...
NeverTooMuchInspiration chapter 1 . 3/29/2016
Definitely is tricky to write Luffy as a marine and have him not come off as OOC. You did a pretty good job here, especially towards the end. Excellent job with the tense as well, it read very smoothly. Thank you for writing and posting this!
BlindieMac chapter 1 . 3/5/2016
That was really good! Exceptionally sad, but so good!
GrayGalleon84 chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
I remember reading this a long time ago. It took me a while, but now I've found it again and I'm glad I got to read such a well-written absolutely heart-wrenching story again. It's only meant to be read once in a while to feel the full pain after all.

I didn't expect it the first time, but it just proves you can't judge a story by it's tags.

Test of character indeed. We're all proud of you Luffy.

With that said, I'm glad I found this and read it again. It's really good. Brought me to tears, which is actually a bit difficult to do. The ending was absolutely terrible of you, but it fits. It fits so well that I wouldn't wish for another ending, even if it meant Luffy getting a second chance.

With that said, I'll be keeping an eye on this story for a future reread - and you, you have a great writing-style, haha.

Adieu. Have a good day and may great reviews flourish your stories. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2015
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE
THIS IS NOT WHAT I SIGNED UP FOR TT_TT
lany-chan chapter 1 . 8/22/2015
Urgggg such a heart-breaking story yet amazing at the same time
SayMrrp chapter 1 . 8/20/2015
I'm tearing up. Thanks a lot... for writing this.
JerzaIn24 chapter 1 . 7/23/2015
Shit that was awesome...
LadyTeldra chapter 1 . 4/27/2015
Oi! Do you happen to know any other Marine Luffy fics? I only found one other so far in which he drags Smoker along with him...
LittlemissLazy chapter 1 . 3/8/2015
Oh God! I never even knew that a tear fell from my cheek, I only realize that i cried when i finished reading this. Are you a freaking sadist, Author-ya? Well, I don't care because this is an awesome story, Awesome writer.
ashlynhope28 chapter 1 . 2/22/2015
This is so realistic and great and I love it so much. Thank you for writing it and making me cry. ;_;
yuki chapter 1 . 1/28/2015
Wao. This fic make me want to cry.
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