Reviews for An Alternate Universe
NARUMOKA chapter 23 . 6/9
finish this fanfic
nick chapter 16 . 3/29
I want to ask you a few things. 1. How old is everyone in the fanfic to be? 2. Why did Sabrina want to see Brock anyway? 3. How did either of them fall in love with each other? 4. How did either Daisy or Tracey fall in love with each other? 5. When Nurse Joy said that they didn't want Swinub and Machop, just who were "they"? 6. Why didn't they want those Pokémon anymore? 7. And that's why they were donated to the Pokémon center? 8. Where and when did Jessie get a Shellder? How? 9. Why did Jessie choose to have Swinub? 10. And why did James want the Machop? Be sure to respond to this.

nick
nick chapter 2 . 10/14/2015
I want to ask you a few things. 1. How old is everyone in the fanfic to be? 2. Why did Sabrina want to see Brock anyway? 3. How did either of them fall in love with each other? 4. How did either Daisy or Tracey fall in love with each other? 5. When Nurse Joy said that they didn't want Swinub and Machop, just who were "they"? 6. Why didn't they want those Pokémon anymore? 7. And that's why they were donated to the Pokémon center? 8. Where and when did Jessie get a Shellder? How? 9. Why did Jessie choose to have Swinub? 10. And why did James want the Machop? Be sure to respond to this.

nick
Vijju123 chapter 1 . 9/10/2015
Its very, very VERY nicely written. Keep up the good work!
Sor-Rin chapter 21 . 9/4/2015
I've read all the chapters so far and i really like it :)
keep up the good work!
Reader Of Fate chapter 19 . 8/19/2015
Keep up thw good work
Guest chapter 2 . 7/30/2015
Jessie's shellder bite a slowpoke and evolved it to a slowbro so how she get it back.
The Legendary Falcon Fall chapter 17 . 7/30/2015
This chapter is in interesting.
Dream Guardian King Allen chapter 17 . 7/29/2015
That was a pretty good chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next.
The Legendary Falcon Fall chapter 16 . 5/27/2015
quick show some good skill in battle.
Dream Guardian King Allen chapter 15 . 5/27/2015
That was a good chapter, it is nice to see interaction between all the characters.
BlackLucario19 chapter 14 . 5/26/2015
it's good please keep going
BlackLucario19 chapter 2 . 5/26/2015
it keeps getting good
BlackLucario19 chapter 1 . 5/26/2015
it's good
AnthonyC22 chapter 6 . 4/8/2015
Butch being called Bitch is a new one. He sort of acts like one, lol. Ah the bike destroying Pikachu at it again.
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