|Reviews for Protector|
| Turtle Taz chapter 5 . 1/8
This is really good. I hope you update soon
| jh831 chapter 5 . 1/5
story looks good. however, would like to see longer chapters.
I would rather wait for a long chapter than get a quick update.
I'm not saying it is a bad story, no, it looks good. I look at when the story was posted (2013) how many chapters (5) and how many words (4,462). so in say over 3 years the story only has 4,000 words, makes me want to skip it because either there is a huge gap within the chapters, or the chapters are spread out and really short.
again, I'm not flaming on this story, all I'm saying is chapters could be longer
| rosebeach14 chapter 3 . 12/30/2016
What about toys r us
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/24/2016
More chapters please
| ctc chapter 5 . 12/12/2016
looking fwd to next chapt!
| Cassandra30 chapter 5 . 12/11/2016
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/8/2016
this is a good story keep up the good work.
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/7/2016
So far very good chapters of a little short other than that great work thank you for writing
| anja.quickert.9 chapter 5 . 12/8/2016
| shunshu chapter 5 . 12/8/2016
Hola! muy buena me encanto espero que lo actualicen pronto besos
| darrelldeam chapter 5 . 12/8/2016
I received the chapter alert, but it didn't work. The alert was for chapter 6 while it was actually 5.
| WhiteElfElder chapter 5 . 12/7/2016
Good start to seeing how Jethro changes by this.
| kirsty21 chapter 5 . 12/7/2016
cool update soon thanks
| Beth5572 chapter 5 . 12/7/2016
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too. Keep up your great work and hope you have a great ending for this great work of art.
Thank you and Please,
| Cateagle chapter 5 . 12/7/2016
Well, that starts getting things interesting. I have to wonder just how much the office is going to adopt "Charlie", but I'll bet that'll give him a lot more folk in his corner.
It should be rather interesting to see what efforts Dumbledore makes to find his "pawn"; some how I doubt he's going to appreciate the goblins assisting the adoption.