|Reviews for The Bond Permutation|
| pisquenta chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Awwww no way you ended like that! lol
Shelly's a big boy now
| PennamePersona chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
It's great history. I can imagine the characters.
Thanks for write it.
| CountryGrl chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
This is hilarious, and so well crafted. Loved it! XD
| CrazyAce'n'PokerFace chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
lovely and amusing and heart-warming. :)
| Andrea chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
That was SO cute!
I loved the reference to Jim Parsons costume. That made me laugh quite hard.
This felt very in character and super cute.
| greenchopstix chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Wow that was great! Every charachter was spot on. Your such a great writer! More stories please :)
| meisaku chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
ohh so lovely, very in characters, thanks for writing _
| babblemouth chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
| Angelic Guardian chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Holy. Crap. So when Sheldon asked Leonard if he'd recognize him, and he made all of those weird face, he was referring to his...bedroom facial expressions? Wow. That's pretty freaking awesome. XD
This was really cleverly executed. This is the first BBT fic I read that was written in Leonard's POV, so that alone was an original and creative way to tell the story. I liked how you showed just how well Leonard knows Sheldon, yet at the same time, that he's still genuinely stumped by Sheldon's actions most of the time because, well, it's Sheldon, haha.
Howard and Raj were great in this, too. Very in character. Howard's line about the guys seeing him as a sex god and Leonard immediately saying, "No, we don't" was so funny.
I loved the epilogue. Very sweet with just a touch of implied naughtiness, haha. ;)
Just one thing, though, there was one point where you accidentally shifted to third person with Leonard's line about him having to be Sheldon's translator. Other than that, though, great fic! :)
| 72 tabatha chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Loved your story.
| Numb chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
I forgot how great a sense of humor you have. The Kanye/Kim joke was too funny. I love it when Sheldon goes mainstream. ;) And Stuart-con, ha ha ha! I want to go to there! You captured the humor of the show wonderfully.
My Shelnard feels are all over the place. I love their love for each other. Their friendship is one of the greatest ever! And like I've told you before, you characterization of all the characters are always IC, but your Leonard is my favorite! Kudos on making the story from his pov.
A wonderful, very true to the show story, Mari. I really enjoyed it... expect for the Sheldon sex faces, those I could have gone without. ;)
- Numb (who is too lazy to log in.)
| Redrose chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Wow well written and so in the character which is very rare ! Thank you
| Anonymississippi chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
I totally forsee this event occurring in the final season because there's been so much hype about it. And it's really difficult to find new ways to 'make it happen', as they say. So telling it slighted, from an alt. pov, makes this a well-crafted piece of work. Kudos.
| moyrani chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Gah! Absolutely genius. Telling the story from Leonard's POV (Sheldon's unsuspecting bestie! Totally plausible) and including references to one of my favorite Holographic Excitation lines:
"There are certain things that say to the world, I have a boyfriend, and he’s not made up. Matching costumes, hickeys and sex tapes. Pick one."
OMG, he did ended up doing all three for her. Love!
Both the hickey explanation and the description about the faces he was making on the tape had me ROTFL. Did I spy a reference to Jim's Rocky Horror performance too? LOL. That couldn't be a coincidence.
Howard/Raj's juvenile ribbing, and their apologizing later, was very much IC. The whole condom revelation and subsequent conversation was both funny and endearing in showing the guys' bond.
Loved the epilogue too and how Amy ended up distracting Sheldon.
Thank you for this, dear Mari! :D