Reviews for Broken Clockwork
nenopip chapter 6 . 11/26/2016
This was a mess
akanelaxa10 chapter 1 . 8/6/2016
make more chapters please
Guest chapter 7 . 9/22/2015
Qriiz chapter 7 . 11/12/2014
nice one, gonna follow this story.

I can't quite grasp Narumi and particularly Naruto's motivation.
so far he'd mention Narumi, vengeance, to protect, to be the strongest, acknowledgement. all while saying one thing and denying the other to several people. I hope you did this intentionally.

and, you could use some beta reader.
CosmicBeing chapter 2 . 11/10/2014
Alright I've read enough. Shove that weak Naruto and canon shit right back up your ass.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
You should put a page break when you jumped from the prison break plan, to talking to Kabuto.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/6/2014
your a fucking idiot konoha haters are thevscum of the earth haters should die and spot spouting there hatefull shit to everyone making naruto join orochimaru really? maybe you should go fuck yourself
Madgormley chapter 7 . 8/28/2014
Excellent story i really hope to see more updates on this
kunt-destroyer420 chapter 7 . 8/13/2014
Seems I was right with my first review.
Tenma Sosei chapter 3 . 7/21/2014
Oh hell no. I was hoping Naruto be pairing with his sister. Well good luck. NarutoxNarumi 4 life. Kakashi can lick Sasukes sack for all I care.
Wrath of The Sun Deity chapter 7 . 7/18/2014
Why aren't you continuing this story
yindragonkiba chapter 7 . 6/5/2014
Like it like it!
Y u no update chapter 7 . 5/26/2014
Y u no update
Guest chapter 5 . 5/1/2014
i do not see why mikoto would cheat and have sex with minato when she knew he was the reason for narutos loneliness and destroy her own family
Guest chapter 2 . 2/26/2014
You ruined, I don't like spoilers, your method though unique is annoying and to me a spoiler, what fun is there when the ending is already revealed?

The only entertainment is HOW...the others are all long gone...shame...I liked the first chapter
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