Reviews for Broken Clockwork
SEEKER452 chapter 7 . 11/2
great start hate the jump back and forth in the time line it give away and can give headace
Danirodriguez1995 chapter 7 . 9/20/2021
Please continue, the story is very good, Please don't give up, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a huge fan of this type of story and the truth is they have no comparison.
Bluehaireddemon49 chapter 5 . 2/22/2020
No shit is that a real fact?
MonsterCritic96 chapter 1 . 12/2/2019
Kit is Foxes and Pup is Wolves
Gamma-X chapter 5 . 4/5/2019
Oh my god... Narumi better not be no fuckin' Yandere! She deserves to die if she is!
Also like the Minato x Mikoto action.
Guest chapter 7 . 11/18/2018
Nul comme fiction jai rien compris
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2018
Your truly a good person for adopting. Enjoyed the fanfic
Guest chapter 7 . 12/28/2017
Why have u abandoned the story ? It is such a great story .. update if u can
nenopip chapter 6 . 11/26/2016
This was a mess
akanelaxa10 chapter 1 . 8/6/2016
make more chapters please
Guest chapter 7 . 9/22/2015
supert
Qriiz chapter 7 . 11/12/2014
nice one, gonna follow this story.

I can't quite grasp Narumi and particularly Naruto's motivation.
so far he'd mention Narumi, vengeance, to protect, to be the strongest, acknowledgement. all while saying one thing and denying the other to several people. I hope you did this intentionally.

and, you could use some beta reader.
CosmicBeing chapter 2 . 11/10/2014
Alright I've read enough. Shove that weak Naruto and canon shit right back up your ass.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
You should put a page break when you jumped from the prison break plan, to talking to Kabuto.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/6/2014
your a fucking idiot konoha haters are thevscum of the earth haters should die and spot spouting there hatefull shit to everyone making naruto join orochimaru really? maybe you should go fuck yourself
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