Reviews for Beltane Child |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's sad that my favorite story of yours is one in which my favorite character is hardly in it... Because you seem to ruin him every time you do focus on him. Maybe I'm not reading enough of your stories to know where you do treat Ron properly - after all, you've made Ginny a harpy in this story while also treating her fairly well in others. But, man... I have to believe that Ron murdered your family or something to justify what you've done to him in this story and the time travel one. FFS, an 11 year old who isn't super into homework doesn't mean he's impossibly lazy and refuses to do anything to pass his classes. Nor does once letting the jealousy and hurt of Harry refusing to share the secret about how he got into the Tournament ONCE or wearing a cursed object and having it affect his emotions so that he stormed off say anything fundamental about his character. Actually, it does. It shows how miserable Harry without Ron, because Ron is the fun one of the three. Harry broods and Hermione is neurotic, and that's why they both need Ron. It's why Harry and Ron's friendship works and it's why Hermione and Ron's relationship works. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it when I can have a smile on my face when I read the end of a story. I liked this take, and it was an unique idea. Thank you! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's the new year, so I read it again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story. Really well written and great romance |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed reading this. Good match with Harry and Daphne. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story - it's a great scene. |
![]() ![]() ![]() rereading this after many years (I just remembered it and decided to read it again :D), and something hit me. It's strange Harry is so gung ho with Celticism considering it only took 3 self-proclaimed Christians to turn him off from Christianity, while he has had hundreds of devout Celtics torture and/or kill his family, friends, and himself either directly or indirectly. This is still a great fic, but I am finding it funny that the chance of dancing with girls is enough for Harry to convert lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Re-read it. I just came to skim over the story but ended up re-reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good Story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good one |
![]() ![]() some sass sssssssssss |
![]() ![]() ![]() Make a Hogwarts read the book version of this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I read it again. |