Reviews for Beltane Child
cdnviolets chapter 11 . 5/16
Each time I read this, I feel happy.
Know1o chapter 11 . 5/3
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FlavioSlayer chapter 11 . 4/18
Después de tantas historias intensas qué he leído esta semana esta es un poco de soplo de aire fresco relajante qué disfrute demaciado en leer, el harryxDaphne es de mis parejas favoritas así que fue muy relajante leerla y con un simple pero bonito final
NhaTrang chapter 11 . 4/11
Eh, did stick to the end, but this is pretty pedestrian. WAY too much "tell, not show," the youths speak like pompous fifty year olds, and nothing really happens.
EvelynnSylph chapter 11 . 3/27
This is a really nice story. Very wonderful
EvelynnSylph chapter 6 . 3/27
Twins! How nice
EvelynnSylph chapter 3 . 3/27
I'm really glad he went to Andi for help. She could really help him a lot
EvelynnSylph chapter 2 . 3/27
Very interesting so far
Aniki35 chapter 11 . 12/5/2024
Great story. Could use some polish and a little more showing instead of telling but all and all a great read
Anonymous6364 chapter 1 . 11/8/2024
Only problem is some grammar errors, and the names of the kid
dodkirua chapter 11 . 10/27/2024
Super histoire
johnny99 chapter 11 . 10/20/2024
Great story, thanks for writing!
Baz62 chapter 4 . 10/4/2024
I'm a bit lost with why he needs to tell the Weasley's. They don't have any say in his life. Should just cut them out. Ron is a jealous prat, Ginny only wanted the reflected fame and Molly doesn't want to know him after breaking up with Ginny.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/1/2024
Very very exposition heavy at the moment. All the conversations feel really unnatural when each sentence is a paragraph made to explain things to the reader unnecessarily. It writes like you're talking down to a child, leaving nothing unsaid, when in reality you omit a lot of information when talking, leaving context to fill in what goes unsaid.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/12/2024
I mean can you not make the child legitimate as it just floats over the story like a dark storm due to the angst
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