Reviews for Diffraction
German Girl chapter 5 . 4/2/2016
I loved the last chapter. Please continue this :)
6BlueSweaters chapter 5 . 7/21/2015
Amazing. Loved every moment.
GermanGirl chapter 5 . 9/26/2014
Hey! I enjoyed this. Last chapter didn't feel awkward at all, no worries. More please :)
You write kinda emotional and slightly "poetic" at times but it does't feel cheesy (in case you were worried 'bout that)
BubblyShell22 chapter 5 . 9/25/2014
Wow. What an awesome way to end this series. I loved it and especially loved how you used the events of the finale to tie this all up. That was great. I loved all of them, but especially loved Raph talking to Leo and trying to calm him down. That was so cool. Nicely done on this. I hope you do more of these in the future because they're awesome. At least we won't have to wait long until next season because it's next week. So awesome!

The Bubbly One,
MonsterKitty1220 chapter 5 . 9/25/2014
I love all your stories so much, it's unreal! Update soon! :D
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 5 . 9/25/2014
This is so gorgeous! *U* Rock on! I LOVE this so much! *U*
InsaneDutchGirl chapter 5 . 9/25/2014
This is beautiful! You are an awesome writter and very gifted if you ask me. Your small stories are structured well and I just love the simplicity of some, the heartbreaking emotions of others, and just the plot of your last chapter in general. Please keep writing because I really would like to read some more xx
Laineenhele chapter 5 . 9/25/2014
I loved the season finale of the cartoon and I loved this chapter, great ending for the fic :)
Guest chapter 5 . 9/25/2014
O.o woah that was intense - because of, or despite, the frozen atmosphere, simple clarity and methodically slow rhythm of the writing. Which is very strange - like you managed to burn with ice. xD
Great stuff! Thanks for updating :)
wizwitch42 chapter 4 . 7/4/2014
xxxi – Ooh, migraines suck—both for the victim and everyone around. Trust me, my mom and I both get them.

xxxii—aw, that’s kinda cute. I actually like that better than what the show actually did! …and the detail with April baby-sitting the cooking made me giggle

xxxiii—Aw…*gives Leo a hug*

xxxv-…I’m debating whether or not I want more details…I’m guessing it was Raph’s POV, and “the little one” is Mikey…

xxxvi—I have SAINW vibes from this one…

xxxvii—You know the more someone says to drop it, the more curious others get…I wonder what exactly Casey meant, along with whether or not Raph knows…


xxxix—ROBIN! I literally was thinking that the second Mikey mentioned the trapeze artists dying from cables coming loose, and when you had him appear in the end… *squeals*

Stephanie: She was into Batman—mostly Dick Grayson—before getting into Ninja Turtles…

Can I please do a full, fleshed-out one-shot based off of this prompt?!

Anyway, I love your little things here. In fact, the only problem I have is that they’re so short, so I can’t get all the details I want…*shrugs* Oh well. Happy fourth!
Linzerj chapter 4 . 6/7/2014
Loved trapeze. Now I need any form of Turtles/Batman&Robin crossover that starts with this sort of thing.
Flynne chapter 4 . 6/7/2014
Ow ow ow so much pain WHY but YAAY update! :D Beautifully written, as usual. I really like "smoke". "You're bein' all poetic and crud again, aren't you?" Hee! Glad to see this story's still in the works!
BubblyShell22 chapter 4 . 6/7/2014
That's okay, AD. It happens to all of us. I really liked these snippets and really thought they were interesting. Nicely done on this. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.

The Bubbly One,
wizwitch42 chapter 3 . 5/14/2014
xxi: Ooh, you screwed up! It's always the quiet ones you've gotta watch for!

xxii: That's kind of cute...

xxiii: Poor guys...both so cut off from everyone...

xxiv: ...okay...

xxv: I need to give these guys hugs.

xxvi: This reminds me of a Robert Frost poem...

xxvii: ...I'm still trying to figure out that quote fully...

xxviii: Nice and sweet until we know Mikey's back to normal!

xxix: Well there's a twist...

xxx: ...*walks away to cry*
wizwitch42 chapter 2 . 5/11/2014
xi: I actually put this into mobile view just so I could translate that.

xii: That's what happens when the scientist doubles as the doctor!

xiii: confusing...

xiv: There's a reason for that, Irms...

xv: Okay...

xvi: angst!

xvii: sh, sh, don't worry, Mikey, everything'll be alright...

xviii: Yes. Very good.

xix: Least he didn't make a joke about losing his arm!

xx: she's such a sweetie...
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