Reviews for Different City
ProfessorNafis chapter 50 . 2/12
This is awesome, one of the best you wrote till now
Ibskib chapter 50 . 1/6
The epilogue was a bit of a downer, it was also an abrupt transition that simply did not work in my opinion with a just as abrupt and slightly confusing end.

Just jumping to Clark and Diana being together as a fait accompli of sorts, sabotages the romantic elements in this story, a real kick in the pants for everyone that shipped Selina.
It would have been better for there to not be an epilogue at all rather than the one you chose, perhaps leaving the scene with Clark and Selina as the final one instead.

A better epilogue would have been seeing things progress more between Selina and Clark, it would have been great seeing Selina become married or something, to her own great shock :-)

breaking it - breaking in

symbol that I figured - symbol of me figuring

didn't you used to - didn't you use to

I'm the organizing - I'm organizing the

ain't take - ain't taking

I'm forgotten - I've forgotten
Ibskib chapter 49 . 1/6
A brought you - I brought you

got to - go to

I used the - I use the
Ibskib chapter 48 . 1/6
he's greatest gift - his greatest gift

on board this - on board with this

you're best - your best

stuck her - stuck here
Ibskib chapter 47 . 1/6
what they hell - what the hell

as could - as I could

we here - we're here
Ibskib chapter 46 . 1/6
she was depended - she was dependant
Ibskib chapter 45 . 1/5
bare foot - barefoot

cause you - because you

cloths - clothes

it's all arraigned. - it is all arranged.

and learned - and found out
(word repetition)
was more than a bit flattered - was flattered
(word repetition again)
Ibskib chapter 44 . 1/5
You're planet - Your planet

kinda of help - kinda help

Joker's attack - Joker is attacking
Ibskib chapter 43 . 1/5
seems clique - seems cliched

Maybe it's better I don't know - 'Maybe it's better I don't know'

blond - blonde

worked good - worked well
Ibskib chapter 42 . 1/5
the shoot - to shoot

Why so - Why, so

but the way - by the way
Ibskib chapter 39 . 1/5
an double-cross - a double-cross

back up - backup

Information costs money - Information is costly
(otherwise the next sentence doesn't fit)
Ibskib chapter 38 . 1/5
"under a yellow sun his abilities might have been delayed"
Ah, so that's the explanation for this AU? Clark doesn't get powers from Earth's sun, instead it retarded his natural kryptonian abilities and slowed down their progression?

make easier - make it easier

get in - get into

call the - called the

I wants some - I want some

you're guards - your guards
Ibskib chapter 36 . 1/5
harden - hardened

damage - damaged
Ibskib chapter 31 . 1/5
Annoying that it's yet another Clark that hides with only a pair of glasses and a bit of subterfuge, it is one of the parts I've never liked, it just strains SoD too much nowadays.

feinting - feigning

moved passed - moved past

also understand - also understood

slip passed - slip past
Ibskib chapter 30 . 1/5
black anklet soaks. - black ankle socks.

close in less - closed in less

here his - here, his

have use - have a use
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