|Reviews for The Magic of What Could Have Been (or, Blink, and You Might Miss It)|
| Honey the Queen Bee chapter 6 . 3/6
Dear god that was sweet and sappy and i am up way past my bedtime just so i could read this. I nearly screamed in lrotest when i thought it wouldn't be them. But it had to be them. Very well done.
| Shalk Zailackar chapter 6 . 12/8/2016
Thank you for the story! I have really enjoyed your writing style, it is very unique. The way you weave dialogue and story events with internal thoughts and seeing visions all intermixed in a very organic method. It reminds me very much of an art piece how everything is not so straightforward but is instead a complex meld.
You also did a very good job at invoking an emotional response from me while I was reading the story, both the happy and the sad.
Once again congratulations on a well-written story.
| themaltesefalcon chapter 6 . 10/15/2015
This story could not have been more perfect. I'm in awe of your story-telling ability. Thank you so much for the emotional catharsis you've given me!
| Chanuka chapter 6 . 5/25/2015
Lovely story until the last chapter. Please fix the wrong thing about the Nobel prize. It means so much to Sheldon and to it written wrong just messed up everything.
There is one Nobel prize awarded in a ceremony in Norway and that is the peace prize. All the other (original) prize are handed out in Stockholm, Sweden. Shouldn't be hard to edit. The countries are quite similar, so you could probably just change the names.
| kimjo2 chapter 6 . 3/15/2015
wheeeew! i was starting to get nervous this wouldn't have a happy ending. what an amazing and touching story. thanks so much
| Anoveldebut chapter 6 . 1/31/2015
Wow. This was really well done. I really liked how you tied Sheldon's work with alternate universes to Penny's intuitions. It really worked.
| Tee Hill chapter 6 . 10/11/2014
awesome story :))))))))))))
| loving-reader-and-writer chapter 6 . 9/19/2014
Loved it this was so wonderful and emotional and real.
| amyh52 chapter 2 . 7/7/2014
| amyh52 chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
Unusual, love it
| Non-Canon Fodder chapter 6 . 4/24/2014
A beautiful story, beautifully written.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing this wonderful piece. You have an amazing gift and I do hope you realise just how excellent your writing is.
The stream of consciousness was original and expertly executed, and on occasions, your prose stopped me in my tracks with turns of phrase so exquisite they really contain a touch of magic themselves.
Huge respect to you, and please, please write more Big Bang!
| TuesdayTerrible chapter 6 . 12/6/2013
To lazy to log in via smart phone, but thanks to txfictionqueen I am here and since I've already thanked her profusely it is now tjw author of the pieces turn. This story is simply mind blowing, it was so well orchestrated, it flowed effortlessly- it was just beautiful and you pulled at my heart strings the entire time. I really really would like to see more from you. :-)
| tx-fictionqueen chapter 6 . 12/4/2013
I can't tell you how much I love this story without pulling out a dictionary and looking up every word that my body feels right now, then typing it into this small little review box. I can't...I just can't. I can only say that this was the best Shenny fic I have ever read, and I've read some winners.
The justice you did Amy and Leonard as humans with faults and victims of an unrealized love affair at the same time was inspired. So many people in this fandom are quick to bash characters just to get your point across, but you brilliantly were able to rise above that and just write that as human beings. I love that.
That sex scene when Sheldon and Penny finally come together in THIS reality had me in tears, it was so beautiful. Not just because of the amazing way you wrote it, but because of the imagery; it had me wishing that in this very moment, I loved someone that much!
Ugh, please, leaving every other fandom behind and only write Shenny. Or, take my earlier advice and stop writing fan fic all together, and write a book! Then send me a copy. And sign it: to tx-fictionqueen, my number one fan girl.
| tx-fictionqueen chapter 3 . 12/4/2013
I'm breathing heavily and I feel so icky. Mournful. This chapter was incredibly sexy and then incredibly heartbreaking all at once. My body was not ready. Okay, onto chapter four.
| tx-fictionqueen chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
Stop, stop RIGHT NOW and never write fan fiction again. Why? Because you need to be writing novels. Seriously. Take this offline send it in to some publishers.
I am in awe of/jealous of /turned on by your prose. This is the kind of stuff that makes people believe again. And I've only read the first chapter so far! I'm trembling as I go on to chapter two...