Reviews for Of Rivals and Lolis PLUS
Eaglezaruma chapter 1 . 9/14
For Sayuri's outfit you used Stocking's clothes, For Naruto the only two possibilities that I can think of are Yosuke from Persona 4 or the wire using character from Akame Ga Kill.
kanazak chapter 1 . 3/8

You would make me extremely happy if you continued this, especially considering I never got to read the original!

This story could be a lot of fun to read... what there is of it is great at least.
duskrider chapter 1 . 2/19
Nice job with this one.
the naru foxxx chapter 1 . 10/19/2014
please update
ShepardisaBOSS chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
A simple fool chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Ha, love the nature of this story. Good thing it's crack or else the way you just skimmed over everything would have sucked, but its crack so it doesn't matter. Can't wait for update.
Paladin-kriss chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Hahahahaha, fantastic
KokuenDG chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
The main protagonist from devil survivor and stocking from panty and stocking? I guess so.

It's supposed to be a super crackish fic after all, so I'm expecting it to have some oddities in it.

Though I am hoping that you'll keep the characters how you planned them out before though. I really wanna see a Yandere Hanabi and Kuudere Hinata.

Just not Gasai Yuno levels. Maybe Nu-13 levels though.
Manah Scarlet Shadowsong chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
That is all
Lazruth chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Jackpot. Just... fucking jackpot, man. I am SO damn glad I gave this a chance.
Not sure about Naruto's outfit, but I'm pretty sure that Sayuri's was based off of Stocking from Panty & Stocking with Garterbelt.