|Reviews for A Pale Hope Rises|
| hermonine chapter 21 . 14h ago
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/13
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| FleurSuoh chapter 21 . 3/13
Can't wait for next chapter
| Luzith chapter 21 . 3/11
Loving it! Good to see Elion learning some new skills - even with his deviousness in getting the lessons!
| tazztazz chapter 21 . 3/2
brilliant story cant wait for more chapters hope some more are uploaded soon.
| paskinmath chapter 21 . 3/1
this story is wonderful. Most elfling harry stories are a little too saccharinly sweet. Yours is plausible, coherent, and engaging. I can't wait to read more of the twists and turns of this AU. Thank you for your efforts.
| ZachN17 chapter 21 . 3/1
Thanks for providing an awesome read so far. I'm glad I found this story. I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work!
| ErikArden chapter 21 . 2/27
Ok...so I've read your story over the last couple days while I've had some downtime. I really like it for the most part, the one thing that I'm having trouble with is Harry's personality. He is 18 years old and has been forced to grow older than even his years should allow in the war. Someone that has experienced what he has wouldn't be capable, I don't think, of the type of childish innocence he is displaying, partly because of the trauma, and partly because he is has grown in a world where 18 years is an adult...suddenly LOOKING like he's 6 wouldn't mean that he IS 6.
I know it sounds like I'm hating...I'm not. The story is VERY well written and I like the story. Yes, child Harry is bothering me, but within the frame of how you've written him the story is great.
| Penny is wise chapter 21 . 2/27
| Lina03 chapter 21 . 2/26
Wow, Saruman is one mean mother...Anyway, great fic and I can't wait for more )
| Protagonist Of Life chapter 21 . 2/26
| jupimako chapter 21 . 2/26
Great chapter. Looking forward to the next!
| gurlygenes chapter 21 . 2/25
loved it! i think i see it now, but i had been wondering if/how you were going to get gandalf to the white wizard stage, but im guessing thats coming up soon! cant wait for the next chapter!
| LCluvanime chapter 21 . 2/25
Hope gandalf come back to life soon!
| alec-potter chapter 21 . 2/25
Nice chapter, thou the plot didn't appear to move ahead much.
Overall great read, keep writing.