Reviews for A Pale Hope Rises
gv100 chapter 1 . 10/21/2020
thank goodness for no slash!
Guest chapter 30 . 9/17/2020
I love this story
Guest chapter 30 . 9/13/2020
Just reread this story because I missed it so much! Can't wait for the next upload! Hope you are staying safe!
Guest chapter 16 . 9/9/2020
Why would orcs whip a baby? It doesn’t make sense to me...
iPod reader chapter 30 . 9/8/2020
Well this is second to the final stand, but there's still more you could write.. will gandalf be going to Gondor or to helms deep? And what will the reactions be when he arrives? Will lathery still go through the mountain of the dead pass it just ride on? I personally would like to read about the ghosts because they are the reason for the turning off the battle.. but it would be ultimately cooler if some of the ghosts where friends of Harry's who actually volunteered to fight with them. Maybe giving him closure for past deeds.. Hopefully you'll continue this story. If not this chapter says it all they lost the great city, Borimer didn't make it and gandalf failed but Elion and Estel slept on in peace. :)
iPod reader chapter 13 . 9/6/2020
I know it's a bit late in the game; but because of the journey through moria gandalf, became gandalf the white not the grey..so your deviation from this point should still hold true if he was to you corrected as gandalf faces saruman in the next few chapters and with the hobbits releasing the ents which played a major role in tearing down the dam and awakening the forest but with the deviation of that, that could throw the story line a bit and since the writer's block from finishing the story in total. Ending with Elion's complete adoption and argorn's wedding.
iPod reader chapter 5 . 9/6/2020
How could the hobbits not ignore that?! I mean seriously in the next few chapters they become leery of him and it's sux that Harry is put through another emotional rollercoaster even after he saved their asses.. Sam needs to pull that stick out of his arse and look at the who . I know frodo comes first in his book but he reacts to just about everything with a negative Outlook on things. Such an optemmist
iPod reader chapter 1 . 9/5/2020
I've read this story so many times over and it's still a work in progress? When will you able it as completed? Please do so soon
stylo1 chapter 22 . 8/30/2020
the horsemen did not have enough men to face him in the open plains... cause horsemen behind wall are that much more effective? truly the army of rohan is only usefull of their open plains and leaves helms deep weakly defended but for its thick walls
stylo1 chapter 22 . 8/30/2020
shouldnt aragon by now have begun to wonder how such a little child could fight a war despite being 18 years old
stylo1 chapter 21 . 8/30/2020
he can heal gandalf from the brink of death but healing his own cracked ribs is to dangerous? if ribs are truly broken even the smallest movement is beyond painfull not to mention dangerous for punctuting organs, the fact that he can still move properly would mean the ribs are only cracked thus easy to heal
stylo1 chapter 15 . 8/30/2020
wonderfull more child abuse
stylo1 chapter 14 . 8/30/2020
uruk hai not urak hai
stylo1 chapter 11 . 8/29/2020
the way you describe 'gandalfs' magic sounds like silent casting to me something harry should know plenty of. unless gandalf has different magic and harry gained this aswell.
ofc this is totally disregarding that middle earth has valar which rule the world through their own rules and trying to upsurp those domains just isnt going to work. but lets ignore that and pretent harry is learning to learn 'different magic'
stylo1 chapter 10 . 8/29/2020
gandalf the grey emmisary of maia cannot dispell a simply silencing charm? hah if harry was full grown and not a full nutcase he couldve destroyed the ring already as apparently his magic is different and bypasses that of middle earth
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