Reviews for Bedauern
Adrinette4life chapter 1 . 6/13/2017
I cry
I die
I sad
I mad
But I also glad
Because your story is beautiful
HannaWinchester chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
Trying not to cry you know i like it TwT
ThexXxAngel chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
I Love it...but even now I still shedding tears...the end...I don't have it clear...I do not know if everything is a dream or if Eren is really dead but Levi returned to block everything...I somehow Like that end indecisive...but I really would like to know clearly how is the thing...

I hope you understand since English is not really my language
Emo-kitty chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
Angst. You should filter it as angst. And you tore my heart from my chest, again.
Why do you enjoy making me cry? ;-;
SilverRingasaMemory chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
*raises hand* I wanna know what happened. OwO The ending is kind of confusing w
LovingPillow chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Oookay, what actually happened? I somewhat understand it but you did say to ask if we wanted to know what actually happens :P
Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Levi, WHY?! If you miss Eren so much, why? Eren is so sweet in this story T.T. I can't bear it! Eren can't be dead! NOOO!
Hitsugi Zirkus chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
Why would you write this, aaaah it hurts so much QAQ I didn't expect Eren to be dead, nooooooooo, aah, you presented it so well. Poor Levi ;A; I can't believe he's in such denial that he thinks up Eren so realistically in his mind ;n;
As much as it broke my heart, thank you for writing this ;;
Dinny Lourdes ElTomatechigi chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
I was wondering why rivaille didn't go and see the outside world, assuming that eren would want to so yeah.

but omfg


/throws heart at/ you can have it- I just- too much feelsss omfg

i swear this pairing always gets the feels, especially when higher ups go all, NOW YOU HAVE TO KILL EREN :DDDD

like omg, he's human too for goodness sake.. Worse still when his own corporal has to kill him. If there was no such pairing, it still would be sad, having to kill your own comrade. Omg

so many angst based on the idea that rivaille has to kill eren in the end, this is the first fic I've read on it (I've seen a few doujins) and let me just say you've annihilated my heart. Eren still waits for him in the castle, omf so sweet, but then he's dead.. It's heartbreaking. But Rivaille would join him soon after right? :'D he's getting on with age, they'll untie again, I'm sure..

there were a few grammatical errors, i think some of them the past tense isn't there, but the idea of eren patiently waiting for him in the castle, even after he's dead is kind of heart warming :'D most of the time it's one asking the other not to worry about him anymore then leaving forever. Hurts more i guess.. Ahhhh /dies on the floor

sorry for this long ass review :'D
Echo Andalice chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
great.. another one of your work that make me cry..
SyntheticKize chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
This is just so beautifully executed, sir. It put a hella stab through the heart! :') Kudos!
TwinArmageddons2 chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Wut happened. Tell me. ㅇㅇ
saerusa chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Ukh T_T if i was Levi... i can't hold on my feelings when i read this beautiful fict TT_TT
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Such a heart-wrenching story, you actually made my eyes sting a little though I'm kinda a cold-hearted person.
Now Levi knew Eren has already a dead person, killed by his own hands, but what I wonder is if the real Eren is dead, then ''what'' is beside Levi now? I couldn't help but ask though I know no matter what they will still be side by side together forever (and this is true, when Levi die of old age, Eren will soon be gone too.)
Still, I enjoyed your story very much. Please continue to write because I know you're good at it
IsyPerolla chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Sooo sad! I could not help but shed a few tears...
At the beginning I thought that Eren was dead, but after that some time passed and the two interacted together, I did not thought this was the case... but then... this happens in the end, I discovered that Eren is REALLY dead and, worse, killed by Rivaille! Oh my god, it's too much pain for just one person... why, why you did it, Rivaille? :/
I was apprehensive at the very end, because I thought that might wake and Eren was gone, but still he was not, he kept himself beside Rivaille, doing company at the he!
Ahh god, my heart is so tight! *cries like crazy*

Despite all the sad, I loved, loved, loved it xD
Write more fanfics this couple *-*
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