Reviews for That Makes Three of Us
Ladymevi chapter 6 . 5/17
charmed2027 chapter 25 . 4/18
i think that this was one of the most well written story's that i have read in a very long time. i love how you wrote the characters as they were originally in the show, but you added your own twist. i have to say in the short time that i read this story, it was an emotional roller coaster. you made me fall in love and feel for these characters in a whole new way. and in the final chapter i actually almost cried. i screamed at the top of my lungs because i didn't want it to be over. i wish there were more authors like you out there. i love your writing style as well you keep the reader on the edge of there seat. you ,ake things great and then you never know what happens next. i do hope that you would consider writing a sequel or more story's such as these. although some of the plot development could have used improvement like explore more of the scenes, go more into detail. but over all i loved the story.
insertxusernamexhere chapter 25 . 9/10/2015
OK I admit, I was a little skeptical about male pregnancy. But thus was really heartwarming and beautiful. It reminds me of my baby sister
CandlelessFlame chapter 25 . 8/28/2015
Guest chapter 12 . 8/25/2015
So i was in the middle of this chapter and i stop reading cuz i had to say this (KEVIN IS THE BIGGEST DICK I HAVE EVER SEEN)like god damn... give edd a break but edd is also an idiot for taking gim back i wouldnt this nigga bugging
Guest chapter 12 . 8/25/2015
Wait edd takes Kimberly to school with him/
And they had just bought her a car seat umm i thought that she was only like 3 months old or less im confused but... i love the story
Guest chapter 12 . 8/25/2015
I know this is fiction and it a story
But if i were to be in edds postion i would have dumped kevins sorry ass right then and there like no.. go back to ur hoe nah boo bye
Guest chapter 12 . 8/25/2015
Ok i know this is fiction and it is a story but what the fuck
If i was in
Guest chapter 4 . 12/21/2014
Wait Wait Wait I thought it was a boy?
Guest chapter 3 . 12/21/2014
Why is Kevin such an asshole in this! He cheeks on jazz and not his pregnant boyfriend WTF. and then he calls her babe
Lady Death 16 chapter 25 . 4/5/2014
I love this!
Guest chapter 25 . 3/31/2014
Benny chapter 2 . 3/4/2014
I really love this story, Edd is so cute and Eddy really likes him, i hope they both get together.
missanime21 chapter 25 . 8/27/2013
that was so cute i loved this story sense i first read it that was a great one i love your work keep it up:)
fullmoonwolf950 chapter 25 . 8/27/2013
Shut up I'm not crying I just accidents spilled eye drop in my eyes.
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