Reviews for Apex
SWTORpadawan chapter 15 . 8/13/2017
This is one of my favorite chapters. You definitely captured the voices of Kiwiks and Orgus. Well done.
SWTORpadawan chapter 44 . 8/12/2017
A great chapter. You definitely had Orgus' voice down.
Only thing that bothered me was Orgus' acceptance of the relationship. Based on his reaction to the JK/Rana hook-up, i don't think he would have been quite so accepting.
That aside - awesome work!
SWTORpadawan chapter 46 . 8/12/2017
Thank you. That was beautiful.
Atheist god chapter 11 . 8/2/2016
You're right... The part I hate in swtor is the long distance you are walking. Thanks god for Sprint skill
Guest chapter 8 . 7/3/2016
This is a good story but Bengel's surname is MORR. Not Moore, Morr.
GAM12 chapter 44 . 5/6/2016
Continue the story if you can, but don't rush it. It's a really good story.
Ann chapter 14 . 12/31/2015
Redemption's Avenger chapter 48 . 6/4/2015
Hayram Antilles, ancestor of Wedge Antilles, who, in my fanfiction, gets transported to the STO universe and becomes a Fleet Admiral. Love the story and the changes to the main storyline, shame it hasn't been updated in a year.
correnhimself316 chapter 46 . 3/13/2015
...No need for the path to be painful if their romance .
RedBeetle chapter 48 . 3/1/2015
Hi, I read this through in one go, and I will go on record to say that this is by far the best Star Wars story since the original trilogy. I love how Hayram evolves from the noble Jedi to a much more interesting character. Kira is really well written, and I thought that she is way more human than in the game. T7 is way more interesting than in the game. My only problem is that you didn't spell check some of the chapters, but that is a very small complaint. I was up to midnight reading and re-reading Apex (Collision chapter I particular). Great job!
Curry Hunter chapter 48 . 2/5/2015
Pffft wow! I love fan fiction and have even dabbled in writing some myself, from my limited experience in writing I can honestly say that this is incredible. The development of characters when faced with moral choices and romance is so deep and well written. Especially the romance side, its not just one gratuitous sex scene to another. There's a connection and development there, I feel more connected to Hayram than any of my own SWTOR characters. I was a little disappointed when I realized there was 'only' and I use that loosely, only 48 chapters because I honestly could not stop reading. I went through it all in a single evening. When reading the showdown with Sadic I had a genuine smile on my face. I sincerely hope you continue with this story, it'll be interesting to see how they deal with tatooine and alderaan to the confrontation with Angral. You, Sir have talent!
Ben Thryss chapter 47 . 1/15/2015
Really love this story. It's a very interesting take on the Jedi Knight story, and it's superbly well writen to boot. Thanks so much for putting this up, and I hope you get back to updating soon.
Phoenix operative chapter 48 . 12/10/2014
This is by far the best swtor fan fic i've ever read. Very well written and a good story. You also portray the characters in a good way. Favorite!
Wanderer chapter 27 . 10/19/2014
I stumbled across this story earlier this week, and I was quickly drawn in. After reading twenty-something statements of your appreciation for reviews, I figured I'd better take a hint and leave one. So here goes. I have loved every moment of this story. Your character development is so amazing that I sometimes don't even think about how well you've handled the plot. And the vignette style is very creative and entertaining. One thing I would recommend is proof-reading the chapters before releasing them, as each seems to have a few errors scattered around. A few things I really liked: You write banter that is very fun to read. I liked how you placed the inevitable spat while both were sleep-deprived; it helped add some extra realism. Also, I really like that you've started to give Hayram some character change, with becoming less gloomy and coping with his Compulsion. I really love this story, and I hope you continue it. I'm eager to read the rest, and hopefully chapters you'll write later as well. Thank you for writing this beautiful and enjoyable story.
carrotycake chapter 48 . 7/30/2014
AHAHArgh I'm having so many Jedi-forbidden-love-feels right now. Sorry. I'm playing this game as a female Jedi knight, so no cool romance stories for me! But this is amazing, your style of writing is incredible. I really, really liked the 'In Love' chapter - I totally get what you mean about writing fluff with a straight face (I have that problem too!) but it came out so well and just painted the most amazing picture. Also Orgus's reaction to their kiss was really funny.
Um. That is all. I'd love to read more! Please...?
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