last chapter. yup, no dc alien form here. suck.

if you expect that from this ff, don't bother.

i rate it 7/10, the first few dozen of chapter were good, slight edgy-ish writing but a good 8/10, but overall, it just good 7/10, rare ben 10 ff.

SPOILER, NO NEED TO READ THE REST
the last chapter was not the strongest chapter, I didn't like how easy it was for Ben to convince Alien X to heal injured people all over the world, repair infrastructure, and mind wipe people's memories about the war, like what? i get Alien X is Op, can definitely beat goku but nah... really unnecessary.

i am highly disappointed at the fact ben 10 does not have alien form from D.C universe.

no Kryptonian (superman) form

no martian form

no Tamaranean (starfire) form

no czarnian (lobo)

y'know how sick it would be to see those alien form in peak condition thx to the Omnitrix?

im at 30 chapter, I guess the author is gonna pretend it doesn't exist, even tho it is basically the main concept of the Omnitrix, the tool for diplomacy... fk.

still a good read but wow, this suck.

I think there might have been a Cowboy Bebop reference in this episode. With how Heatblast dispatched his robotic opponent.

This fic was awesome. Everything was a blast!

In what Universe did Vilgax manage to create a Device that can disrupt the Ultimatrix aka the most advance device created by the most brilliant mind? Where did you pull such BS author?

Still no repair for Buzzaro

If he has access to the speed force he should be a flash-tier speedster, pretty OP. Although if it effects Ben he should have super speed in his human form but w/e.

Someone with Superman-tier strength got knocked over by a rolling desk? Lol, that's why I hard a hard time getting into DC. Zero power level consistency.

Cool now steal some tears and get a Kryptonian form. Priorities.

How's she a hero when the whole thing was her fault to being with? Lol.

It was amazing

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This story will never get old. It's Hero Time!

This chapter justified the existence of the stupid third season of Alien Force. Great job.

Hypnotick is the name of Big Chill's Predator. Just to let you know.