Man I wish this had the next chapter. I really was looking forward to Ranma’s reaction to why this happened.

that is good. update soon please.

That chapter was absolutely impressive. Wow!

Just found this story. I really like it. I do hope it will be continued, though I can see it has been 5 years since last update.

Being French, I can't help but notice an error toward the start of this chapter. Instead of "Êtes vous d'accord?" the question paused to Setsuna should be "Comment vous sentez-vous?" ou "Vous sentez-vous bien?" Not only that, but because of her apparent age she should be called "madame" rather than "mademoiselle". (Mademoiselle being the french word for miss.)

There is other errors with your french later, but FFnet don't make it easy for me to point them out.

That said, the story itself is excellent, I'm sad it seem to be abandoned since 2015. If you ever go back to write for it, I'll be there to read new chapters.

Good story. Continue please

Please return to this soon

Good story so far. Though I think you are playing up Ranma's crassness, unless that is intentional.

Just when it was getting interesting, you got eaten by post-grad. Pity. Needs more lesbians, though.

neat, an update on a dead fic.

I wish you would do more of this. This story deserves continuation.

Need more! Be weird to let the story die with Ranma on the crapper.

Will you ever finish this story?

Very enjoyable, I hope you have a chance to get back to this eventually. It should be interesting to see what Setsuna has to say, since as far as I knos she actually has all of her memories from the Silver Millennium.

For the chapter, one thing that stuck out to me was the conversation between Usagi and Ranma. The back and forth worked on the short statements, but you might want to add something to indicate it ls still going on when you get to the full paragraphs- it made me think you were dropping into normal conversation again with the two ignoring each other.

I've been enjoying this quite a bit so far- it's a fairly standard setup, but the writing is well done and the execution of the concept has been working very well. Glad I gave this a chance.

One thing on this chapter that may or may not have been intentional, but Ryoga was definitely giving off some creepy vibes when he first showed up. I'm not sure if that was left over from edits or not given your Author's Note. It was enough that I was actually expecting him to turn out to be working with the villains though- if he was just supposed to be more arrogant than before it might be worth taking a look at that.