Reviews for Pinch Hitter
FateBurn chapter 2 . 7/11/2013
Good chapter and interesting way to connect him to the Senshi.
FateBurn chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Interesting start
anon chapter 2 . 7/10/2013
I'm always sad when you don't continue on your other great fics, but this is starting to seem like it's worth it. I hope to see more soon.
Ranmayamabushi chapter 2 . 7/9/2013
Woah Very nice, im definitely looking forward to seeing more... keep up the good work!
Wing Zero 032 chapter 2 . 7/9/2013
It seems that Ranma and Nabiki found the main Moon transformation wand thus effectively nulifying Usagi's transformation amulet that seems to be a replacement or emergency spare device, incidentally it seems that the senshi powers have now locked ranma's cursed form permanently

I like where this is going, once the the new sailor moon (lol new moon) makes her public appearance the senshi related media will go wild on it, with many theories about what had happened to the original Sailor Moon ranging from a Super Sentai/Power Rangers "pass the torch" move up to many differents wild theories of Sailor Moon's "death" in the latest monster attack (she suddenly fell uncoucious after relasing her attack, to a winteese point of view, it could have meant that she did in fact either exausted to death, the strain of the injuries taking their cost, or the possibility of a delayed effect of an enemy's magic attack that had hit her previously, and the fact all of the senshi present screamed in horror at the sight of their leader suddenly colapsing like a puppet who got its strings cut and not moving afteerwards is probably the fastest way to asume that Sailor Moon is Dead, hell it even may get that as a newspaper headline!)

Great job, I hope to see more of this story very soon
Compucles chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Sorry, I meant to review Ch. 2, but I'm typing this on my 3DS, and I'd have to start over to fix it.

Ah, I was hoping Ranma's curse wouldn't be locked. Otherwise, I'm really enjoying this story, and you do have the talent to pull off the locked Ranma subplot. I just hope you don't lock it permanently.

By the way, there's a couple of things that I wish would appear in more locked Ranma x Akane stories. First, Ranma is still legally male, so he could marry Akane with the right precautions taken. Second, sex and possibly children with Instant Nannichuan, either by allowing Ranma to temporarily change back if the method behind the lock would allow it, or to be used by Akane.
cj1of4 chapter 2 . 7/4/2013
So are both Ranma and Usagi Sailor Moon now?
Janissa chapter 2 . 7/3/2013
Your story is very enjoyable to read. thank you. Hmm it will be interesting to see what you take it. I have a lot of questions that I think your next chapter or two will answer but one question I have which I cannot wait for answer to is why has not the Sailor Pluto stepped in and helped with Usagi health?
Jimbobob5536 chapter 2 . 7/3/2013
Power theft, of sorts. One of the rarer types of fuku-fics in my experience. Pretty nice.
Feldoran chapter 2 . 7/3/2013
I am loving the set up here and the overall full fleshing of all the characters. Kinda sad to not see more Akane in this chapter. I am really hoping this doesn't become a perma lock fic, because while interesting I think it takes away a little bit of the fun of Ranma. I am definitely looking forward to more.
khammel chapter 2 . 7/3/2013
Nice to see the main plot advancing here. Nabiki makes a great foil for Ranma.

Also enjoyable is the unique and interesting portrayal of the canon Sailor Senshi. Could female-Ranma/Sailor xxxx attract the interest of some bored, questioning high schoolers/Sailor Senshi here? (Akane: ! %$#)

Then there is the interesting look at Usagi. Looks like she is power sharing (w/Ranma), and has to cope with 'power outages' leaving her 'just' Usagi sometimes, while still having all her responsibilities (and deep seated desire to help) as Princess.

Lots of questions on lots of minds, to be sure. Looking forward to the next chapter. (and the one after :) and... )
irnzenmonk chapter 2 . 7/3/2013
good chapter ne
Aiyoku Saotome chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
I LOVE THIS! So much! Please continue!
irnzenmonk chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
i think it is a very good start ne
khammel chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Based on what you show here... and from what I have seen of the next chapter of this story... I think you had a real chance to combine Ranma's comedy with Sailor Moon's. I realize BOTH stories have a lot of serious elements too (so did the famous comedy MASH on US television).

It will be interesting to see how the repercussions of Serenity's one-night-stand... oh to read the headlines of those Silver Millenium tabloids during that 'crisis'... reverberate down (up? across?) the millennia. And of course screw up Ranma's life even more. As is his (and her) lot.

Perhaps as a crossover "Lines of Destiny" is the urtext. Based on antiquity, Stephen Tsai's comedic "Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Ranma" was first published about four years before "Lines". I know "Lines" is considered one of the most 'serious' Ranma/SM crossovers. But, SHOULD a Ranma/SM crossover BE serious?

It seems you think not.

Bully! Darn the canons, full steam ahead!

Best of luck, I genuinely hope your muse smiles on you for the duration of this story. And, of course, your others. Especially "Understudy".
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