|Reviews for Soldier of Zero|
| cko2 chapter 6 . 3/10
I must say. This version of satio os very fun to read. The background you hint at for thevworld yountalk about can only be a world with thecsailor scouts. The last name and how you write tabbys clone is only be sailor merc. I see she married ryo then in that world. It will be fun to how you start changing things up now that things have changed with wards.
| WraithHeart chapter 6 . 3/8
Need more... Need...MORE.
I really like your version of Hiraga. Seriously, do the good shows have sucky protagonists? Zero No Tsukaima would be so much better with a manipulative Saito.
And happy Birthday!
| tsukiyomi83 chapter 6 . 3/5
Great story. Update soon.
| TheannaTheWhite chapter 6 . 3/5
Brilliant sir. It's been an engaging read thus far, and I hope to see more from you in the future.
| TheBhoyInGreen chapter 1 . 3/3
Well this is the first story I've begun to read and is brilliant. All the precise thinking, the plans and the manipulative behavior is nice to read.
| Duncan0Idaho chapter 3 . 3/2
Hill of swords does not rocks, not really, it's the first to propose crossovers? yes, but GB shirou is a derailed character who is mostly a psychopath and a badly made expy of Archer, while one was calm cool and colected, GB Shirou is itching to kill some one.
It's good if taken as a crack fic tho.
| Ferrilsblood chapter 6 . 3/2
I could guess, but it was a joke :P more or less, cause I can really see her do that. The society she lives in, isn't very magically advanced in most areas.
Fouquet... I don't really know what to think of her... love her, hate her... I'm just indifferent to her... though I like that you've given her... a bigger role :).
Yes it has... you do have plans for Wardes... and I like how you handled him, while not tipping off that he is a traitor. Fooled Saito well too, since the two are... well not best-est buddies, but buddies and not outright rivals.
Glad to see that Wardes is still on the traitor path, though i have an itching feeling that you might be trying to convert him from a traitor to a double-agent... I wonder if Saito will play a major role for that... if it ever comes to pass that is. I don't like the man and if he's still a traitor I hope he gets a Karin grade punishment from both Karin and Louise.
(I really don't like that, that particular issue regarding the Wardes' betrayal and how it reflected Louise from her family's standpoint, was never mentioned in the anime or in any if not ALL the fan fics where Wardes was a traitor. Her family treats it like it hasn't even happened and don't even dare try to touch the subject... except trying to force Louise to quit magic and marry, which is like throwing salt in the wound... Ok I'm done ranting now XD )
I like how you're portraying Saito though :). He's badass like that. Just out of curiousity, wouldn't anyone from his homeland try to find him... I think you mentioned something somewhere about him getting an MIA status, but didn't elaborate much on it.
And Lastly... I like that the chapter is long and well written... better than most for that matter. Makes up for the long update and it is an enjoyable read :).
| Reishin Amara chapter 6 . 3/1
ah...you asked me my fatal weakness... excellent with plots and layouts...wriing...not so much.
on a sidenote...kirche really is a dumb girl huh…?He family rivals with the valieres ...and she cant guess who louises mother is…?
btw...loved the tricks saito did to requonquista...best ive seen in a one i came up with...Saito quietly and systematically assassintes everyone on the bigass airship above new castle and then when the day of battle comes...he tilts tha gunpowder filled airship right in the armys direction and parachutes down to te castle while the ship flys for a crash course into the center of requonquistas army. new castle then finishes off the surviving invaders.
ive also debated if they spent the night using that smll airship of theres to transport soldiers out of newcastle to a nearby area and use the near empty csstle as bait...once enemy troops are deep inside it...blow it up with all the sulfur...
just two ideas if u ever wana us hem in other fics.
love how you interupted the monologue of foquet
| guest chapter 6 . 3/1
| garoorar chapter 6 . 3/1
Well, the comeback makes up for the long delay, nicely done!
| llat-2 chapter 6 . 3/1
Thanks for the update. Will Saito's failed relationship be with Kirche?
| Mistletainn chapter 3 . 2/28
This far I find no apparent problem for me, and I found the omake really amusing. HoS Shirou is OP lol. Did you ever visit Gabriel's forum?
| Mistletainn chapter 1 . 2/28
Well, this fic seems good enough and this version of Saito is quite interesting... I hope the pairing isn't fixed yet. Coz I hope I can vote for Cattleya as IMO she's the most 'pure'(personality-wise) character in FoZ. She'll ensure Saito's manipulative nature more 'tamed'. (Bit less logical, bit more emotion-driven).
| kitiem3000 chapter 5 . 2/19
I like this Saito. Not needlessly confrontational, but not a walkover either. I dislike the uber-angry Saito's who do nothing but scream about the injustice of the universe.
| Retsof chapter 1 . 2/5
Followed your PM here. Seems like he played Tabitha a bit too easily, but I suppose, he is a veteran and she is a teenager. Also seems odd how much he is giving away about himself. But it is still generally well written. Oh, and if you're still taking votes, Cattleya.