|Reviews for Demigod Draco|
| guest chapter 6 . 1/8
You have too many elements from other stories, it seems like you just keep adding more and more elements without really explaining the story or what it the plot. I feel that it needs more structure. It has potential but I find it too busy. This was not said in malicious but in a hopefully constructive way.
PS. I think Cathy is a little strong for Slytherin and too abrupt.
| Holalatte chapter 11 . 7/2/2013
I have been looking for this idea and i found it. But. Sure the idea is great but there are too many ocs it would jave been better of you stuck to the canon characters then this story would be definitely interesting. And also your chapters tend to be very short.