Reviews for Wet Sands
maggiejoma chapter 5 . 8/8/2013
Loving this...:-)
Rita01tx chapter 5 . 8/8/2013
How horrible to learn Sam sacrificed his own wife and kids to the demon! Although Bella, Seth and the children are relatively safe, I'm anxious about their survival in the long run!
Flavia Ribeiro chapter 5 . 8/8/2013
Amazing!
maymay74 chapter 5 . 8/8/2013
Great chapter hun
moodyval chapter 5 . 8/8/2013
This story is so good!
Really different plot line.
Looking forward to reading more.
I'm guess Edward and Bella are mates?
dazzleglo chapter 5 . 8/8/2013
Wow drunk on wolf blood good one.
elaine67 chapter 5 . 8/8/2013
Really good , can't wait for more
2muchtrouble chapter 5 . 8/8/2013
Getting high on wolf's blood is novel. I like it.
Camilla10 chapter 5 . 8/8/2013
Maybe you explained it, but I don't remember how Bella's kids are "safe". Where are they?
debslmac chapter 5 . 8/8/2013
loving this
GemmaH chapter 4 . 8/5/2013
Gah! So stressful! I'm glad I've caught up early on so I can let my thumping heart rest before the next chapter! Nice work :)
GemmaH chapter 3 . 8/5/2013
Excellent action and plot development there! I wondered how the red eyes of Edward on the beach and the golden eyes of Esme at the hamburger stand fitted together, now I see. Can't wait to hear more about how they got to this point though. Poor Bella having to leave her children, I can only imagine :(.
GemmaH chapter 2 . 8/5/2013
Poor Bella! I could feel every emotion long with her then. I'm guessing it won't be long until the crimson-eyed strangers are after her, eek!
GemmaH chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
Wow! Intense start to the story, I can't wait until all of the pieces begin to come together - I hope Bella can get find some safety for her children.
HappyCup chapter 4 . 8/4/2013
A talent for both horror and humor is rare. You do both so well.
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