Reviews for Wet Sands
Camilla10 chapter 3 . 7/17/2013
Mmm, not very nice this Edward ... and Jasper is worse.
Annie Butts chapter 2 . 7/17/2013
WOW! Can't wait for the next update.
3 years and this is my first vamp fic :)
Greye Granger chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Holy crap this is awesome!
TLammy chapter 2 . 7/10/2013
Damn, good start. Look forward to more.
majose chapter 2 . 7/9/2013
A nightmare indeed. Where is Esme?
majose chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Interesting...
Luvtwismut chapter 2 . 7/7/2013
Whoa! I am floored by this plot!
There are so many questions and I don't know where to start!
Are Jasper and Edward with the Cullen's or have they gone rogue?
What is up with the cannibal shape shifters?
Where is Esme? I'm guessing that was her at the shack, but maybe it was Alice?
I can't wait to find out more!
Thanks for writing and sharing!
Xoxo
Jen
motherbeatrice chapter 2 . 7/6/2013
omg this is so good...can't wait to see what happens, and Edward wants to eat her...?
Vane3131 chapter 2 . 7/5/2013
Omg omg I need more ! Were the Cullen's gonna eat Bella?
Vane3131 chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Oh this is good! Great dreams!
Guest chapter 2 . 7/3/2013
Mercy! This is crazy.

Can not wait for the next chapter.
dreamiedreamer chapter 2 . 7/5/2013
Holy smoke, every monster was after Bella and her kids.
mommymac0508 chapter 2 . 7/4/2013
Holy crap well Jacob is crazy and so is the tribe now it seems the Cullen clan are not animal drinkers will Bella and the kids be safe update soon
Rob Smut Lovers chapter 2 . 7/4/2013
Poor kids. Poor little Jason is wolf offspring and Sarah is a different kind of monster. I'm very proud of Bella. As the only *weak* human, she's tough, I'll grant her that.

I'm enjoying your characterisations. I've always thought that shapeshifters and werewolves should be portrayed as somewhat mentally unstable, if not outright insane. And vampires...well, the thought of coming face-to-face with something that terrifyingly preternatural would drive ME insane with awe and fear. So yeah, your vampires sound about right.

I don't know how you'll incorporate kids into this mix but I'm ready to find out.

Great chapter! Looking forward to your update. RoseE. x
rmcrms5 chapter 2 . 7/4/2013
Holy crap! This is freaky good!
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