|Reviews for Babylon|
| Trumane chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
If I may give some constructive critiques, Peter has the basis for a brilliant OC, but I believe he may suffer from "Mary Sue Syndrome". I will admit that I've only gotten to through the first chapter, but in my defense you have your characters profile laid out for me :P.
I do hope that you continue writing to your hearts content and if you have any questions of me and be more than happy to oblige.
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/24/2013
Great story I really like Peters sense of humor