|Reviews for A Death in Love|
| le tired chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
This is way too brief and it needs some actual details if you want to connect with your readers. And who stabbed Rapunzel and why? Makes no sense, man.
| Lillielle chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
It's an interesting idea, but it's so short! And confusing. :S Did Mother Gothel stab her, or did Flynn? I find it unlikely that Gothel would stab her, considering her magic hair wouldn't work anymore (or so I presume), but if Eugene stabbed her, how did he get his hands on Mother Gothel's knife? Did he pickpocket her or something? I like the premise, but I think it would work a lot better if it was more drawn out and that was clarified better.
| TheRealMerlin chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
| GoldenHeartz11 chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Good but a bit quick. Try to add more details. Why did Rapunzel got stabbed by Gothel? Please make it more creative of your own writing.
| Steefwaterbutter chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
Good but a bit quick...
"Rupunzel gets stabbed, BOOM, dead. The end."
Who stabbed Rupunzel? Why? Try and make it more drawn out, add some heart-wreanching dialogue to make it even better.
| DreamGirll chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Oh my goodness. Wait...did Eugene/Flynn Stabbed Rapunzel? I dont know...either way I'm sobbing. At least they're together. You did an amazing job. :.)