|Reviews for Fifty Moments|
| Angel of Pandemonium chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
awesome... really good...
| compa16 chapter 3 . 7/26/2013
Loved the reverse edd bit
| compa16 chapter 2 . 7/26/2013
Such an adorable pairing
| compa16 chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
| Del Nayar chapter 5 . 7/23/2013
This was what I was looking for. A more mature version of an old cartoon show that I watched as a child. I actually just came looking for this because I thought that Double D and Marie was a good match, and I must say I was not disappointed. Great job on the story.
| BarthVader chapter 5 . 7/9/2013
No rant this time. It was okay. Enjoyable. Worth recommending.
| Himawari Blue chapter 5 . 7/8/2013
Oh, i can't believe this already ended :c it was wonderful dear, really
Thank you very much for writing it :)
It was an awesome story, and this last chapter almost made me cry, in my mind I saw them growing up (and getting old), together :'3
Im quite in shock, so i dont really know what to say, i just hope you know this story (a lot of stories, actually..) was marvellous, i loved how you describe it and i will be waiting for your next stories c:
Take care, and see you :3
| Himawari Blue chapter 4 . 7/8/2013
OMG how could you killed him? -cries out loud- i felt how every little tear went down through my cheeks as i read!
Sorry for my late review :c i was all busy, so i wasnt able to read even a little vignette, but now im all free.
Well, what can i say? I obviously loved all the ten vignettes! but i would say that my favs ones were: Confusion (I definitely have to write about it), Break, Technology, and Stubborn.
I cant believe the next one is the last :c it kinda scares me to go and read it, but i'll just have to
See ya :)
| WhySoGayTae chapter 4 . 7/4/2013
Thanks for the update! So sad to know is ending but I do hope you go with your reverse shot! and I couldnt guess the movie cuz I'm not one for war movies so I pass lol ;
| Himawari Blue chapter 3 . 7/2/2013
I LOVED the Reverse one (And the Bathe, Name and Pet vignettes), I've never thought about it! It would be so perfect, and they are already the opposite, so it would be like an innocent and timid Kanker girl, and a wild and passionate Doble D... I think I'll write something about it
Hey, Can I use some of your vignettes (the ideas) and turn them into one-shots for the spanish section? pweeeease, i've loved your ideas :) I'd obviously give u the credits and everything
And thanks for the special thanks! hahaha
I think the Bathe one was my favorite, "Ya see that? SO," Eddy started to close the door, "Go to the trailer park, make out with the Kanker, and don't come back to my house until you take a damn shower!" I definitly love it, the personalities just fits so well :'D
Till next chapter :3
See ya! and take care :)
| moony.cotty chapter 3 . 7/2/2013
I would love to see a reverse story
| WhySoGayTae chapter 3 . 7/2/2013
Hey again! Great thanks for more awesome EddxMarie! And yanno I actually wanna see more of your version of the Reverse!Eds cuz as much as I like the one all up in tumblr, I don't ship Kevedd. I don't really like the yaoi (or Yuri) in the Edverse lol and this is comin from someone who loves all the gay and happy rainbows haha but yeah Eene has always been more Eds Kankers, Kevin Nazz in my eyes. So yes I'd def wanna read your rendition of this AU.
| BarthVader chapter 3 . 7/1/2013
Thank you very much. :-)
I continue reading this and I'm even beginning to enjoy it. But, and this is my VERY biased opinion, please don't write the reverse stuff. I consider reverse!Edd the biggest Marty Stu of the fandom. He's usually "reversed" in a way that makes him more appealing to a female reader (a bad boy, an athlete etc.) and no one touches his positive quantities (like intelligence). That last bit has a very unpleasant "abuser/molester" vibe to me. But, as I stated earlier, my opinion is biased and you can write about whatever you please. If I insulted you, I'm sorry.
Have a good day,
| Himawari Blue chapter 2 . 6/30/2013
I laughed so damn hard with Culinary and Weakness vignettes!
I think i died of a heart attack with Music, Question and Answer, i think i can write a big oneshot with those three hahaha, too bad i didnt had the idea first
I love these vignettes, and ill wait for the third chapter patiently ;3 (even though i just wanna read it right now :c)
I'd always loved to think that Marie is secretly a nerd as Edd haha or that at least she knows a lot and its pretty clever, i kinda wanna write a story where they both meet at high school, and she's obviously the troublemaker and he's the nerd, so in one certain moment they are supposed to debate of a certain topic and she wins with a lot of points, its there where his interest for Marie starts, and a lot of things will happen haha
You know what I'd like to see? An Edd x Marie fight (i wrote one yesterday on my first fic of them haha was fun), the reconciliation, and Marie with cravings (im not sure if thats the word, like when a girl want an icecream when shes pregnant and stuff like that)
Well! See ya in the next chapter!
Take care :)
| Himawari Blue chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
akjdbkasj I think im in love with this, seriously :c
Im so into english fics, because in the spanish section i've read all the fics of these two (c'mon, there are just two, and both are mines... And its really like one and a half), and they are just like two of "Eds and Kankers", so im kinda desperate searching for good things to read (like your story)
I think i wrote in my mind at least one one-shot for each of your vignettes, i think that just with Testament and Experiment nothing come up to my mind, but im able to write a lot of stories with the other ones haha and I love the Letter Vignette, its just SO Marie
The same thing happened to me some weeks ago, i was just bored on the net and a pic of Marie and Edd appear on my DeviantArt, and I was like "WOW Who are those two!" And then i remember everything and started writing some stories.
Well, ill go for the next chapter now :3
PS: Sorry for my bad english... not my mother language.