Reviews for The Tale of Nagato Uzumaki
iPonimeOtaku chapter 11 . 8/22/2015
I liked the story a lot up until you decided to split the teams and rearrange them differently. Even though you claim that Sakura and Ino's crushes on Sasuke were toned down, it only seems like Ino's was toned down while Sakura's went up. Considering the fact that Sakura becoming a Sasuke fangirl was mostly due to Ino's influence and wanting a rivalry, it seems weird...Naruto's influence was how she stopped being so obnoxious and changed for the better. Basically, the Sakura that Naruto influenced, changed her for the better and who she might love instead is my favorite character and the one everyone dismisses; the one who is the Sasuke fangirl that the majority of the fandom, Studio Pierrot, and Kishi sees is the one I find cringeworthy, it's hard to believe Kishi would actually write a character like that and actually write for Part 1 and the end of Part 2. The only reason she was Sasuke's fangirl and acted cringeworthy was basically that Studio Pierrot is biased and worship Hinata and that Kishi sucks at writing heroines and females in general. You don't seem like the bashing type, but I can't help but find a lot of it through her Sasuke fangirlism here and prefer to not continue this story much further due to cringing at how you portrayed Sakura's fangirling, and not fond of fics where you split the teams up. NH could have been great, just actually develop it from the beginning rather than actually mislead your fans for years and create a movie where the scarf has more screentime and importance than all of Team Seven combined (why couldn't Hinata comfort him from the villagers rather than just watch? Why does she stalk him continuously...even though she's shy, she has no reason to, just because she happened to be shy doesn't mean she's necessarily smart or kind, believe me, I know from experience, I hate how more than half the Pein fight was filler and the fake flashbacks just for NH to be relevant, Naruto became who he is by growing up alone!), SS I can never accept due to its abusive nature. I was mostly a non-shipper but seeing how OOC the ending was, how much of a scumbag Naruto became (don't say "he matured", Jiraiya was FIFTY and he still acted the same) how random NH and SS came up as well as SaiIno and ChoKaru (ShikaTema, I've been waiting my whole life) and how much development NaruSaku have and how strong their bond has been (bro, I was faceWALLing when apparently, Naruto became the Ultimate Scumbag and told her that "they had to cut their bond") and how accepting and kind the NaruSaku fandom was, I became a NS shipper. If you actually make NH canon in this story, that's fine, just not SS, even though he won't go rouge in this story.

Sorry for this overly long rant and you can just ignore this is you want, I just wanted to get this load off my chest. I mainly read this fic due to Team Ame and that Obito and Rin are alive/in Konoha and I just didn't like the idea of splitting teams for NH shipping reasons or the sudden focus on Naruto when this fic is focused on Nagato. I got a unique story to read that wasn't focused on shipping or main characters of the original series (I am a NS shipper but I am a NARUTO franchise fan overall so I wanted to read on a fic focused on a minor character NOT focused on the main character with possible NH shipping, there are plenty other out there, even if this story was NS, I would still drop this because I wanted to read a unique fic focused on an AU centering Nagato rather than Naruto or shipping, we already have enough out there
Apex85 chapter 11 . 8/6/2015
When did Nagato and Konan get married? Did I miss the wedding chapter earlier?
AntiCreator chapter 12 . 8/3/2015
Is there gonna be a war? Got into war fics recently. I'd recommend Genius Sensei by AlexDnD. Awesome fic with Team 7 smashing their way through the shinobi world. There's an invasion of Konoha by Kumo which has the most epic Maito Gai moment I've ever seen in fanfiction or canon.
Pinoy Gamer chapter 15 . 8/2/2015
I wonder how will Naruto fair against Yugito...
Uzumaki Shadowfox chapter 1 . 7/28/2015
start finishing this fanfic soon
mds777 chapter 9 . 7/22/2015
This chapter was both amusing, cute, and heart-warming. n_n
Kinaki747 chapter 15 . 7/22/2015
Do you think Nagato is capable of doing the Rasengan? O.o
Kinaki747 chapter 1 . 7/22/2015
Thank you for writing this story. Hope you have a wonderful day. :)
freetobe16 chapter 15 . 7/18/2015
OMG! Please update soon!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 2 . 7/16/2015
Interesting! The Third Kazekage eh? Wasn't that the one Sasori turned into a puppet? Hmm...
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
Interesting Naruto story ya got here! So far so good!
Kinaki747 chapter 8 . 7/14/2015
Obito's bell test was entertaining, amusing, and a riot. Good show. n_n
Kinaki747 chapter 9 . 7/13/2015
Ya know i'm honestly surprised at the amount of favs that this story has gotten. A part of me kinda expected there to be more for this story. This story's summary alone caught my attention and i'm glad that it did. Hope you have a wonderful day or night friend. :)
Kinaki747 chapter 6 . 7/13/2015
This story is truly one of a kind. n_n
Kinaki747 chapter 4 . 7/13/2015
Shisui is Tobi isn't he. The only Uchiha that comes to mind when I think of genjutsu plus the body flicker technique and Kagami Uchiha is his descendant Shisui. Have a peaceful day or night depending on when you read this. :)
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