Reviews for The Tale of Nagato Uzumaki
EVA-Saiyajin chapter 2 . 11/11/2013
Decent story thus far, reasonably well written, fairly good details. I like how you handled how and why the trio wanted to follow Jiraiya back.

However, try and keep the Council bashing down. Bashing is bad. What's more, I don't see these three as such an issue that it has to be brought before the (almost completely fanon, as only Koharu and Homura are members of the Council) Council. And Danzo might be suspicious of the three at first, certainly, but he would be all for keeping them around if it meant acquiring Nagato. If they truly are loyal to Konoha, great, if not, keep your friends clsoe and your enemies closer, and he'd still have an opportunity to nag Nagato's eyes if it came down to it.
dTalkingMeowthJ-Cat chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
Awesome Read!
Izanagi God chapter 2 . 8/26/2013
cant wait for more chapters to come out
ultima-owner chapter 2 . 8/25/2013
the evil of paperwork never ends for long
Super Vegito 2 chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
I'm sorry but Nagato had more chakra then base naruto so yeah,
And all three were able to beat a clone of jiraiya,
Oh and nagato mastered all chakra natures,
He was high Jonin level at the age of ten
Able to learn every justu Jiraiya taught him,
Stated to be a genius not seen in century's also jiraiya's greatest student,
erdbeermund chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Hey, I love this idea!
i also really like your writing style and think you portrayed the characters right
i'm looking forward for the next chapter _
greetings

sorry for my english, i'm german ._.
ultima-owner chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
cool idea
Izanagi God chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
is nagato going to be with anyone if he is can you put him with konan.
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