Reviews for Love and War
pat4pat chapter 9 . 3/6/2014
Loving the smut! Sex scene done right :)
pat4pat chapter 8 . 3/6/2014
Safe word bunnies, very clever ;) lol
pat4pat chapter 2 . 3/6/2014
Love that Bob is in this story :)
Guest chapter 10 . 2/25/2014
this is a really good story, plot-wise. I found myself going straight from one chapter to the next in almost no time at all.

if there's one thing I can say for constructive criticism purposes tho, its that the style changes are quite different. it took me a few chapters to figure out there were actually 2 authors, and once I did it made a little more sense. I guess what i'm trying to say is that the first author's myrnin and Claire are a lot different than the second authors, pov-wise.

its still a great story and I hope I don't sound like troll or anything, because I really like this story and can't wait to read more, plus its really well written spelling, punctuation, and grammar-wise.

Guest chapter 10 . 2/24/2014
Great chapter, I love these kinds of interactions between Myrnin and Claire. hope to see more Michael, too, he was adorable in this XD
Guest chapter 9 . 1/23/2014
cheesepuffzapper chapter 8 . 12/10/2013
I thought this chapter was generally well written, just that its a bit confusing and sudden how claire gets from the basement to 'car'. Also you repeat that hes watching her every move when in the house twice.
I think this was well paced, and the content was good. Sorry if this sounds patronizing, im just trying to help :) xx
oryxandcrake chapter 8 . 12/8/2013
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next between Myrnin and Claire.
becca-loraine'.D chapter 8 . 12/8/2013
Gah. I am in awe.
Guest chapter 8 . 12/5/2013
Agreed sckool sucks!
Guest chapter 8 . 12/4/2013
Awesome keep up the good work!
cheesepuffzapper chapter 7 . 11/1/2013
Woop woop claire! Lol thanks for this chapter. I want to think its oliver pointing the gun but that would mean he escaped...he wasn't in such a good shape...well I hope you guys update soon x
Guest chapter 7 . 10/29/2013
Awesome chapter, keep on keepin' on! :D
becca-loraine'.D chapter 7 . 10/28/2013
Gah. I don't really know what to say. The reason there are very few action fanfics on here is probably because they are bloody hard to write, and you? You more than managed it. So I bow to your superior skill at writing, and hope that you write more, because that was one hell of a cliffhanger too. :) Update really, really soon, please.
Guest chapter 7 . 10/27/2013
please update soon!
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