Reviews for Cleansing
keepyourchinup chapter 2 . 6/27/2013
loved it! also: i am absolutely in love with the quote that you used a section of (the washing your hair thing), it's always been very powerful to me and i think it's great that you're using it here!
Master Gaga chapter 2 . 6/27/2013
So Leah's birthday is the day before strange...anyways! This was very intresting, and once again I found myself thinking the next chapter was already there. I was getting giddy at the thought, actually. But then I came down to reality and discovered I had to wait for it-don't you know who I am?-and sort of dealt with it.

Until the next chapter, I will wonder why Leah hates Nessie so much.
Inosolan chapter 2 . 6/26/2013
It's interesting - I like your view of Leah's inner life. There's a stillness there that's fascinating. A sort of armed-stillness.
Clara Meliza chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Nice! I like it! More, please?
keepyourchinup chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
wow this was an incredible first chapter. i'm very interested to see where you'll take it!
Master Gaga chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
Very polished, impressive and not like the things you've done before. Yes, I thought it would be longer. Yes, I thought it would be one-shot. But I'm not bothered by the fact that it's a story. Not at all. I can't wait to see how you expand this.

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