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Fíli’s ‘We’re going home!’ freaking killed me. like full on belly laugh, snorting and shit. XD

so we have a baby bakin' right? I can't be the only one think this!?

Cute! But I was hoping for more of a slow burn, haha! Cute though

I hope she gets sucked into Middle Earth accidentally, lol! Like, the Valar sent them to the specific location in order to pick Hayden up on the way. And then she can be like “I gotta get home!” And Gandalf can be like, “Uh, sorry. Not till the next Solstice!” Lol.

Couples fight. It’s sad but true

Hmmm. I really liked the story of the Company coming to our World….but reading about parties with people you don’t know in your apartment, intoxicating alcohol, people necking and petting, and wearing skimpy clothing to be more sexually appealing….I now remember why I like to escape into Middle Earth fiction where there’s none of that shit (excuse my French). Maybe I’m a spoilsport, but I think Tolkien had a lot more honor in mind when he created Middle Earth, such as the relationship between a man and woman in Middle Earth. The elves, the dwarves, the hobbits don’t go sleeping around. It was a simpler time. A more calming and noble time. It’s another reason why I love Pride and Prejudice. Feelings are more real and lasting rather than a one night stand while you’re drunk out of your mind. This story is starting to feel so cheap.

Lol! The Kili and Fili that you’ve created are even more immature and insufferable than the movie

Huh. Thorin has been alone for all of his life, never truly taking notice of other females. And then Hayden walks into his life and it’s all so sudden. Is this something to do with finding your One amongst the dwarves? Like, “when you know, you know.” kind of thing? I just can’t account for it any other way.

Ugh! Why does every story in fanfiction have her use some revealing dress! And the story is always the same “It’s much more modest than other dresses”. Pssh. That’s because we live in the 20th century where no one has any respect for their bodies and porn is the norm. Queens and Kings wore clothing as a sign of nobility. Savages lived with a loin cloth around their butt. It just goes to show how far the world has fallen that we look for ways to wear less and less clothing rather than more.

Ooooooooh! How embarrassing, lol.

I don’t get it? Lol, what was Kili referring to? What sorts of gatherings? Like, prostitution gatherings? I didn’t understand haha.

Oh Valar! They were sent on a detour to Earth to pick up Hayden! Thorin found his One! lol, jk.

Ahhhhhhh! I LOVE this story! I love Hayden’s reactions and interactions with everyone and I loved how she was enamored with Bilbo, the Hobbit of the story!

Ooooh! This is the first story I’ve read where the company come to OUR world! I love the originality! Carry on then.