Reviews for You're Not Alone
5SecstoThrowItFB chapter 2 . 6/28/2013
Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
It's short but good. The voice that told frodo that he would be alone sounds like the ring.
Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Good one-shot.

I noticed you have, at one point in the story, the past tense change to present tense: "You're wrong," I told the voice, "Sam, Merry, and Pippin will always be by my side." You need to change "I" to "Frodo". Also, if this one-shot were book-verse, Frodo and Sam wouldn't be best friends until towards 'The Return of the King'. Here, after Gandalf's death, Sam is still Frodo's gardener and possibly a friend.

Since Frodo is carrying the Ring, I'm not surprised that the Ring would put these thoughts in his mind. You did good capturing the conflict Frodo has with the Ring. Sad, since some of what the Ring says happens towards the end of the quest, but perhaps by natural causes...

Nice job.

-Aria Breuer