|Reviews for The Spirit of the Forest|
| Lucinda Silver chapter 5 . 10/8/2016
Um, this is potential, but I'm too distracted by too many errors and typo, so I could appreciate if you're going to update l, at least edit your chapters. I'm curious to know what this story's plot. What sort of problems will Edward and Jake have?
| the cat chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
I really like the idea! And I don't mean this in a mean way-I'm just trying to help-please don't kill me! But here are some spelling corrections:
1st paragraph: him, life, prophecy, neither
2nd: it's, Kedavra, dodge, beam, against, onslaught, seconds
4th: Lived, thud, master's, except, 'teary, grey', Eaters, relief
5th: hesitantly, which, which, sparkling, can't
6th: 'him, he', disappear, until, 'was not'
7th: cocoon, awakened
| spencerharris401 chapter 7 . 7/28/2016
Please update this story soon . If you are having trouble finding your muse I have a few ideas.
| ninetaileddemoness chapter 7 . 2/29/2016
why haven't you updated in so long please please please update pretty please with a cherry on top I will love you forever and ever I'll even give you internet money that you that you can use anywhere that is in your imagination will you update if I give you my emoticon money I'll give you my anime and manga please please update I will marry you and then once the story is finished I will get a divorce don't worry I'll make sure to get a prenup so please update I will give you cookies and pie and cake
| Silv Sapphire chapter 1 . 2/4/2015
Poor Draco. Only in 3 paragraphs and suffering...
| littlepanther chapter 7 . 12/22/2014
awww...this is just soo cute well, except for the b*tch...hope she get what she deserves. And i wish to hear more from you!
| JS59 chapter 7 . 11/9/2014
Love it and Jacob got learn how to share
| JackieMikaFrost chapter 7 . 8/4/2014
Please update soon
| chrystal hughes chapter 7 . 7/22/2014
OMG LOVE IT!
| Hyper Melody chapter 6 . 6/24/2014
Can't wait 4 the update!
| Hyper Melody chapter 7 . 6/16/2014
| Slytherin'sGirl chapter 7 . 6/12/2014
Are you going to update? Please!? Harry seems sooooo sweet in this story(though he already is)! :)
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/18/2014
why has this not been updated?! write more now, or i shall be forced to write it myself, for myself
| DragonFire Princess chapter 7 . 5/8/2014
| ObsidianGoddess chapter 7 . 3/30/2014
I absolutely love you and this story this needs to be updated like yesterday XD