Reviews for The Spirit of the Forest
Lucinda Silver chapter 5 . 10/8/2016
Um, this is potential, but I'm too distracted by too many errors and typo, so I could appreciate if you're going to update l, at least edit your chapters. I'm curious to know what this story's plot. What sort of problems will Edward and Jake have?
the cat chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
I really like the idea! And I don't mean this in a mean way-I'm just trying to help-please don't kill me! But here are some spelling corrections:
1st paragraph: him, life, prophecy, neither
2nd: it's, Kedavra, dodge, beam, against, onslaught, seconds
4th: Lived, thud, master's, except, 'teary, grey', Eaters, relief
5th: hesitantly, which, which, sparkling, can't
6th: 'him, he', disappear, until, 'was not'
7th: cocoon, awakened
spencerharris401 chapter 7 . 7/28/2016
Please update this story soon . If you are having trouble finding your muse I have a few ideas.
ninetaileddemoness chapter 7 . 2/29/2016
why haven't you updated in so long please please please update pretty please with a cherry on top I will love you forever and ever I'll even give you internet money that you that you can use anywhere that is in your imagination will you update if I give you my emoticon money I'll give you my anime and manga please please update I will marry you and then once the story is finished I will get a divorce don't worry I'll make sure to get a prenup so please update I will give you cookies and pie and cake
Silv Sapphire chapter 1 . 2/4/2015
Poor Draco. Only in 3 paragraphs and suffering...
littlepanther chapter 7 . 12/22/2014
awww...this is just soo cute well, except for the b*tch...hope she get what she deserves. And i wish to hear more from you!
JS59 chapter 7 . 11/9/2014
Love it and Jacob got learn how to share
JackieMikaFrost chapter 7 . 8/4/2014
Please update soon
chrystal hughes chapter 7 . 7/22/2014
Hyper Melody chapter 6 . 6/24/2014
Can't wait 4 the update!
Hyper Melody chapter 7 . 6/16/2014
Slytherin'sGirl chapter 7 . 6/12/2014
Are you going to update? Please!? Harry seems sooooo sweet in this story(though he already is)! :)
Guest chapter 7 . 5/18/2014
why has this not been updated?! write more now, or i shall be forced to write it myself, for myself
DragonFire Princess chapter 7 . 5/8/2014
ObsidianGoddess chapter 7 . 3/30/2014
I absolutely love you and this story this needs to be updated like yesterday XD
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