|Reviews for Downward Spiral|
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/20/2004
hmm..hmm..i think lex would have looked if chloe was alright...or rather in what condition she was in... and I also think the lady on the other side of 911 would have asked lex to look how chloe is so she could instruct him in first aid and so on...
yeah..i'll just read on now.
| Mystery chapter 11 . 5/28/2003
Sweet story, I really enjoyed it, I hope you write more Lex/Chloe in the future!
| Phaze chapter 10 . 3/27/2003
That was very nice and sweet, but I could not help wanting Lex to look around him and tell Chloe he really doesn't need Lionel anymore, because his family was still all in that room standing around him.
Very good job and I wait for more.
| AngStJoan chapter 10 . 3/14/2003
okay let me at him cuz I'd like to smack the hell out of Lex right now... too bad my hand would have tomake it through a monitor first...
I do love it!
| Tandy chapter 10 . 3/14/2003
Oh, that was written beautifully! The chlex is very sweet! Update soon please
| alecsgrl chapter 9 . 3/13/2003
Ok, this is really to go with my other review. The only thing i found weird was how much they cursed, and maybe you could try another word then bastard, cause you kinda use it a lot lol. Another swear word would be fine. And one request, when you have long paragraphs, maybe you could make spaces every few sentences? Its me, its hard to focus on which line im on with large paragraphs. Thanks, and keep up the excellent work!
| alecsgrl chapter 10 . 3/13/2003
WOW! This was even better than part one. Its funny right b4 the accident in the beginnig Im like wouldnt it be interesting if he hit her? And you certainly wrote it wonderfully! Im so glad there's gonna be more. You are so good to update so oftn, I have a story that I havent updated in months. But I hear yeah. Im in college and there's no time, plus i have so much work that after that my creative juices tend to be worn out
| Phaze chapter 9 . 2/4/2003
Just wanted to drop a note and let you know that I am enjoying this story. I read the first one, but I'm not sure if I reviewed, sorry.
Anyway, keep up the good work and I lool forward to more. Thanks for sharing.
| psychogroupie chapter 9 . 12/5/2002
Hurray! A new chapter. I love it. Lionel is such a magnificant bastard! You wrote his reactions exactly the way they should have been. I really enjoy your views from his twisted mind. Chloe being all protective of Lex is quite touching. I can't wait for those two to have more alone time together. Poor Lex. I feel so bad for him but even more than that I can't wait to see him suffer. (Hopefully in the next chapter). Martha's motherly reaction to Lionel's slap was perfect. I really enjoyed how you handled Jonathan in Chapter 7 (BTW). I am also curious to see if Lance will interfere any more in this 'love' story or if his powers will come into play again. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. -psychogroupie
| Gerb chapter 8 . 11/21/2002
This is so good. I love the way you write Lex and how everyone is concerned about him. Hope the next bit is up soon. Excellent work!
| psychogroupie chapter 8 . 11/20/2002
This is such a perfect set up! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Poor Lex. He is so sexy when he is not in control. Clark and Chloe's reaction to Lance's powers was perfect. I am glad that Jonathan and Martha are there. For some reason I love to see them concerned for Lex's welfare. The only thing missing is Lionel. I would really like to read your views on his reaction to everything. Keep up the good work and please please please don't make me wait too long for the next installment. Thanks for the entertainment. -psychogroupie
| Gerb chapter 6 . 10/26/2002
Excellent fic. Please post more soon!
| aj chapter 6 . 10/25/2002
loving it! majorly! keep it up!
| NickyJean chapter 6 . 10/25/2002
That was really good with the indepths into each character...Can't wait for more...and the build up is great...
| Gemini chapter 5 . 9/27/2002
OMG! I have to know what happens! aaahhh! I love this fic, it's so emotional... wow...