|Reviews for City of Starlight|
| yume76 chapter 1 . 5/15
Hot and Sweet!
| kittyat2u chapter 1 . 1/27
Great! Especially for your first yaoi. I'm happy to say that you write better then most native English speakers be proud!
| Do-You-Even-Logic chapter 1 . 9/25/2014
Pretty good...YAOI FANGIRL OVERLOAD!
| DOACookiMonstr chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
Beautiful. It's so sweet and caring. But can he really have sex after getting a smack down? Huh. Anyways I really enjoy your writing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
It was good you should write more ;3
| imhyperer chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
so good! and your english is pretty good too! :)
| Freya the Mistwolf chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
*inserts tip* I enjoyed this very much... I kinda wish there was more.
| memories.of.rain chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
I like that this had a sweet ending! 3 The sexier parts were nice too ;) *gives you a plate of cookies and a glass of milk* GREAT JOB!
| XxlevierenlovexX chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
Okay, I usually can resist puppy eyes, but my resolve has been weakened since my aunt is in labor. So here it goes: I really enjoy your story. Hurt/romance/comfort fictions always are so sweet, and this is no exception. Your plot was extremely well organized, and well thought out too. Cheers! ( I'm not british, total Allen Walker moment there)
| dearestxina chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
I really think you need to over see your writing hence the grammar and the sentence structure. I advice you to stay away from using third person as you shift around a lot from second to third. Also, I think your writing would be a lot better if you stayed away from "You see," and uhm... just going back from writing conversational format to formal writing format.
Other then that, your story idea is great.
| mamita chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
Hello, I liked your fic, for me there is another couple, and it will Eren and Levi as it were, what a lack of decency and shame, everyone can hear them or see them, but I do not like Eren of seme, uke like me, I love to dominate Levi a Eren, I love the couple LevixEren, hopefully you make more fics of them, so still thanks and kisses.
| Redthorn13 chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
Cutee:) :) :) :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Nice! Really good for a first time! Keep going!
| lorella moon chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
Awesome and cute :)
| AdDicTiOn chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
*throws random happiness and emotions into jar* Love it, just loved it... Looking forward to seeing some more stories in the future.