Reviews for The VIP Package
Daddysgirl11 chapter 6 . 11/2/2013
Awe! Harry stole her # in secret and texted her! that's sweet!
Great chapter! I loved it! Update when you can! ;P
ColorfulCupcake18 chapter 5 . 10/24/2013
Idk! I hope its liam!
bookworm987654 chapter 5 . 10/24/2013
i think it's naill
Daddysgirl11 chapter 5 . 10/22/2013
I think it's going to be Harry or one of the other guys in 1D because she only has Liam's #
Great chapter, update when you can! ;P
Heavenly-Evealen chapter 2 . 9/18/2013
It is against the rules to post stories featuring real people. You can make this story compliant or you can move it to a site that allows stories like this. Keeping it like this can lead to deletion and the suspension of your account.

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Star Mika chapter 4 . 9/18/2013
I liked this chapter it was awesome!
Slow Loris chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
Just a heads up: fics featuring real people are against site rules. "Real people" includes musicians like the 1D guys. I believe this site banned such fics for legal reasons. Maybe post yours on another site that allows real person stories? Tumblr, Wattpad, Livejournal, 1D fansites?

The rules, if you’ve forgotten them:
Entries not allowed:
1. Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc.
2. One or two liners.
3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.
4. Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc.
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.
6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.

Your fic is against the fourth rule here.
Daddysgirl11 chapter 4 . 7/1/2013
I like " The VIP Package".