|Reviews for The Resilience of Time|
| melissa.hanung chapter 51 . 3/3
Ahh... it's finished!
Btw btw,, you HAVE TO. I repeat.
Have some pairing going on in the continuation of this story! There are so many couples to pick from! There's the traditional NaruSaku, SakuSasu... though you might even go for KakaSaku. Scratch NaruSasu though.
Please. Please.. pretty please. Please... please make some pairings happen. Please! Pleaaaaseee... I mean, you pull off Gai x Shizune, right? It shouldn't be so hard to convey a more "normal" ones xDD!
| melissa.hanung chapter 50 . 3/3
WHY DIDN'T JIRAIYA REVIVED? Why only Kakashi? Why "one division 1 anbu" and "jiraiya-sama" dead? This doesn't make sense! This does NOT make sense!
Also I don't understand "Rin, even if it's during his last breath, I'll make Obito believe that the world is worth living in."
THAT DOES NOT MAKE SENSE! OBITO IS ALREADY DEAD! "I'll" in that expression will not work as "past tense"!
| melissa.hanung chapter 49 . 3/3
Aww... I wished you could've spared Nagato :(
| melissa.hanung chapter 48 . 3/2
Ohh.. this chapter... sniff sniff.. Oh and perfect set up to reveal Kakashi's mask right then and there! I guess kishimoto will NEVER do that though... The stake is too high. It's like how Moffats and Gatiss never reveal how SHERLOCK survived that fall on Reichenbach Fall episode!
| GoldenPiggy chapter 18 . 3/1
Though completed, if the 3rd reanimated is Minato Namikaze, Well... yeah... That would be weird and hard for Naruto, and Sarutobi (the 3rd Hokage).
Only way is to read and find out!
| Aeris Mae chapter 51 . 3/1
Awesome story! I enjoyed how in character everyone was, ALL THE TIME; it made it that much more epic. Why? Because it was like it actually could have happened that way in canon. The fight scenes were amazingly written and I appreciated the "Resilience of Time" concept. Very clever. Overall this was well written, entertaining, and overflowing with the powers of Youth! lol, I look forward to reading the continuation :D
| melissa.hanung chapter 40 . 2/28
I'm going to give nod to your A/N. THE ADVENTURE AND THE EPICNESS THAT NARUTO IS ALL ABOUT! Even if you're not replying to my reviews it's fine because you sure can write such great adventures!
| melissa.hanung chapter 34 . 2/27
? Sakura refused Sasuke's offer to sleep with him? (so to speak) that was another huge change O.o though I must say I'm a bit disappointed lol... it won't hurt to see just a liiiitle bit pairing in here... it's been quite bland so far. Yes you put some nods to pairings like narusasu (with the blue ball), kakanaru (with the sasuke's inuendo of they living together), and I'm quite sure there were many others. But you skilfully just brushed the idea in general and never consider any of them seriously.
Such a teaser!
| Fathskie chapter 32 . 2/26
How could this happened... i'm a wreck now... damn i hate u. I hate u. That was like... gosh im lost for words
| melissa.hanung chapter 31 . 2/26
The Crow being put into kakashi is pure genius
Btw why didn't Sakura placed Sasuke's eyes on Itachi?
Also I haven't congratulate you for one thing. Idk if other reviewers had said this but congratulation on making everyone as In Character as much as possible while making massive changes on the plot! That requires real talent. Most ppl will go OOC since 2nd chapter. Oh but you did go a bit OOC with Yamato and Kakashi tho... I don't remember Yamato was such a "kitten". Probably you were influenced by other fanfictions? Good fanfictions tend to do just that
| melissa.hanung chapter 30 . 2/26
OMFG you just rivaled Kishimoto on the famous Itachi's death...
I hate Kishimoto for killing Itachi,, but yet you wrote almost better than Kishi himself in this scene so... yeah. I hate you too ;'( I said you did better because Sasuke chose to abandon his revenge at the end... And I love you for that.
And I love you even more that Itachi turned out NOT dead!
| melissa.hanung chapter 29 . 2/26
Is ITACHI A BAD PERSON?! WHoaaaahHHH what a super duper HUGE CHANGE THERE!
| melissa.hanung chapter 27 . 2/25
LOL Kakashi's too cruel to Yamato xD
And very good character development with Sasuke!
Also I found quite a few typo or unintentional typing mistakes.
Hey btw I wonder why don't you ever reply to my reviews? oops sorry I'm typing under a different moniker now but still. I wonder did you even read this review? Because Digital Skitty read and even replied to my reviews, even to just a few of them. Even after years since her story's completed! But she might be just an exception tho... only a few Grand Authors ever replied to me... but it really showed character when they did.
| melissa.hanung chapter 26 . 2/25
It was Tsukuyomi not Tsukiyomi and it was 72 hours, not 72 days.
| Fathskie chapter 25 . 2/25
I'm worried about B fighting sandaime raikage!
Poor Gaara... lost Shukaku in both timeline... Oh well,, he's doing okay w/o her anyway... Thank you for making/ describing Shukaku as entirely dislikeable so it's easy to part with her
Btw Gaara didn't survive the first time, I don't know why you wrote it (at last chapter) as if he had the confidence to even think that he survived it. He didn't! He DIED! Chiyo brought him back... so literally Gaara didn't survive the first time
And that was quite the battle between Team 7 ! And Naruto got his revenge! LOL