Reviews for Brother and Sister
LittleBounce chapter 12 . 9/16/2014
So the darker alona is coming out; little wonder with all that stuff she's repressing. Poor Alan - been through hell. It's good that she gets to go to bat for her big brother for once - in the long run, that will probably really help her.

Next chapter up sooner please :)) (says the slow-writing hypocrite, lol).

Got some tips for writing flash-backs - can give them off-list if you're interested xxx
Biichi-gi chapter 11 . 6/30/2014
God bless him, Nick's just that kind of Grimm. He has to save people, it's what he is. You gotta love that. Is this kind of loosely based on Believe? Just curious. So...TK huh. Cool
Biichi-gi chapter 5 . 6/30/2014
Wanna pass those tips on to me? 'Cause I can't figure how to do anything with this setup.
And...keep t coming
Biichi-gi chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
O-Kay. Waiting. Too early to make a judgement
LittleBounce chapter 11 . 2/13/2014
So sorry! I thought my review for this had gone through. Came back to re-read a little and found that it hadn't ever showed up. I didn't lose interest!

What's nick going to do? whaaaaaaat?

this was a really neat chapter explaining Monroe's part in their whole background and I just feel for poor little Alona. But you raise another intriguing question... how did Connor know about Alona's abilities? I'm looking forward to finding out when this story comes out of hiatus!

nice to see the softer side of Alan back :)

tig xxx
LittleBounce chapter 10 . 12/4/2013
woooo! unexpected twist there - great job! really nice build from the weird eye appearance to the Carrie moment with the lights! Looking forward to seeing what else she can do. Telekinetic? Very cool!

It's a good bend in the plot because this little ability of hers is going to need a lot of tempering, I reckon. And it's nice to see her suddenly get the confidence to do things her way rather than be towed along by emotion.

looking forward to the update!
LittleBounce chapter 9 . 11/28/2013
Great to see how Monroe fits into all this! So sorry it took me a fair while to get to this. I thought I was all up to date. Wronnnnnnng!

such an awful thing for the kids to see. Poor Austin :( he really tried, as did Claire :(
LittleBounce chapter 8 . 9/25/2013
Cute that alona has a rather single-tracked mind when it comes to playing I-spy ;) and good for her for telling Alan he was being a jerk! He needed to be told... Nicking Monroe's car... Honestly! The pest! Looking forward to hearing more about how they know Monroe!
LittleBounce chapter 7 . 9/25/2013
Eek! Poor little thing! Sleepwalking perchance? Or something more sinister like he first pre-stages of a first woge? I'm glad I didn't have to wait too long before finding out!

Are waitresses often so chirpy in the states? I'm lucky if I can get a smile out of diner girls here, let alone (gasp) a conversation!
Guest chapter 7 . 9/18/2013
Ometh nometh nometh! There, I have punished you for your late update!
LittleBounce chapter 6 . 8/26/2013
eh, nothing wrong with strong language if it's in context. And you do warn... with the rating. So don't worry, honey!

Great chapter! It's getting smoother and smoother and I'm now really keen to know how Monroe knows them and what Alan's got against him. Intriguing! I hope to see chapter 7 really soon.

What I really liked about this was that Alan was actually punished for running by Alona more than anyone else. What did he expect her to think, poor little thing? Sure, he had every intention of going back for her but that poor little girl didn't know that.

keep it up!
LittleBounce chapter 5 . 8/16/2013
hey good cliff-hanger! I love it that Monroe knows something about them that Nick doesn't... and a good bit of tension there with NIcks nightmare because he's a pretty intuitive soul! well, duh, yeah. He's a grimm, lol.

you get a good bit of plot movement here in a very short piece! And formatting looking a lot smoother already, nice job :)
M. Louise E chapter 5 . 8/15/2013
Hi, I love your story. Please do keep working on it when you have time. Thank you . I, read the whole thing so far. Awesome.
mi guard chapter 5 . 8/15/2013
Now you got me intrigued. Why does Monroe know them? Are they blutbaden?
please please please update
Akuma Shoujo23 chapter 5 . 8/15/2013
Aaaaaah, I hate cliffhangers! They make me all jittery and curious! Job well done, you made a non-curious person curious XD!
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