Beautiful

Very good.

So good!

OMG OMG OMG

Luv it! I hate Kelp! So when people ship my favorite character with one I hate it annoys me extremely. I love Dom as much as the rest of you, but Holly and Artemis are my favorite characters. As long as you ignore the fact that I started off hating Artemis. Never mind that, I don't anymore. So I'm fine with their shipping. I think it's cute even.
Au revoir piers.

Arty the third did not have a line lol. Poor trouble. I dont think he would be this humiliated. I am sure he would put up a fight. Holly is a mom she is cool though i truly believe she would likely turn out even harsher and not lovey dovey

If I knew this would cheer up my day, I'd have read this eons ago. It's hilarious, and at the same time, serious :)

Aw, poor trouble. But Artemis's children are just DARLING. (Of course he dotes on them.)

Aw, both cute and a little sad, just for Commander Trouble I mean:). Artemis may be a good guy but he will always be the number one snark master. What a sarcastic guy hehe. You got him down beautifully. All the characterization was perfect!

I enjoyed it so much. You should defiantly write more. I've enjoyed the trouble-Artemis-holly triangle stuff. Sweet job! Thanks!

hehehehe!
hehehehehhe!
update!continue it!give little trubby-poo a nice heart attack!

Loooove it great work

Hehe
Too bad for Trouble, bet all his time as a captain he only thought about how much better Holly Kelp sounded rather that Holly Fowl.
I actually think Holly Fowl, sounds the best

do it! I think you should continue!

Haha, super cute. Angela is adorable. :)
My only complaint is that Holly seems rather OOC (also there's no way she would have fit that well in Artemis's clothes, I feel), but other than that, great fic!

Great story! Victory for our devious Arty!