Reviews for Troublemaker
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24
VirReturnsFromMinbar chapter 1 . 11/12/2021
Very good.
Firefly Alchemist chapter 1 . 5/1/2016
So good!
SmarterThanArty chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
Gillian Lizotte chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
Luv it! I hate Kelp! So when people ship my favorite character with one I hate it annoys me extremely. I love Dom as much as the rest of you, but Holly and Artemis are my favorite characters. As long as you ignore the fact that I started off hating Artemis. Never mind that, I don't anymore. So I'm fine with their shipping. I think it's cute even.
Au revoir piers.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
Arty the third did not have a line lol. Poor trouble. I dont think he would be this humiliated. I am sure he would put up a fight. Holly is a mom she is cool though i truly believe she would likely turn out even harsher and not lovey dovey
Lilith Jae chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
If I knew this would cheer up my day, I'd have read this eons ago. It's hilarious, and at the same time, serious :)
shep114 chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
Aw, poor trouble. But Artemis's children are just DARLING. (Of course he dotes on them.)
optimistic girl94 chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Aw, both cute and a little sad, just for Commander Trouble I mean:). Artemis may be a good guy but he will always be the number one snark master. What a sarcastic guy hehe. You got him down beautifully. All the characterization was perfect!

I enjoyed it so much. You should defiantly write more. I've enjoyed the trouble-Artemis-holly triangle stuff. Sweet job! Thanks!
guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
update!continue it!give little trubby-poo a nice heart attack!
Una chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Loooove it great work
randomosity4arty chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Too bad for Trouble, bet all his time as a captain he only thought about how much better Holly Kelp sounded rather that Holly Fowl.
I actually think Holly Fowl, sounds the best
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
do it! I think you should continue!
Yukiko chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
Haha, super cute. Angela is adorable. :)
My only complaint is that Holly seems rather OOC (also there's no way she would have fit that well in Artemis's clothes, I feel), but other than that, great fic!
ArtyxHolly chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Great story! Victory for our devious Arty!
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