mayi84 chapter 1 . 8/12
let us know what it will be called
bobbysgirl1976 chapter 1 . 8/11
Are You Serious!
ChristianMom54 chapter 1 . 8/11
Congrats! Great story.
Blah132 chapter 1 . 8/11
Congratulations, I would love to buy it please let me know when it is out
Tomoe Dragneel chapter 1 . 8/11
I hope Edward will take care of the little girl whosaved by Bella
Rebekah chapter 18 . 3/24
Just wanted to tell you how much I loved this. Nice job killing off and sending away all the threats! lol
great fic. loved Edwards love towards Bella. Please feel free to make a part 2 ;) I enjoyed this soooooo much! stayed up way too late reading but I have no regrets. Thank you for sharing your work. Look forward to reading other work from you. Take care!

sweet fanfic chapter 18 . 6/8/2016
well i really liked the story line. it had so much potential.
the story was good but it rather felt rushed.
what i mean is that you should have given the story, time to grow you know eventual build up.
a little detailing would have been superb
example: 4-6 months of solitary confinement would have driven Bella morose and distant and to the verge of insanity so you could have talked about how she overcame it etc..
LolaTheSa chapter 2 . 4/11/2016
What kind of duties are those? Those seem like normal relationship rules...

I think you just foreshadowed... :P Nice idea.. bad execution.
stephanie.j.daw chapter 1 . 4/10/2016
really good first chapter. xxx
Kayleigh J chapter 18 . 2/22/2016
i enjoyed this one
Caliborn96 chapter 18 . 2/3/2016
It was okay. Not bad but could have used some more chapters to make more drama. Not too much but just a little hit more. Felt like everything fell into place too easy.
jk chapter 15 . 1/7/2016
so he marries another bitch and she is confined to a room for SIX MONTHS and all he has to do is walk into the room and all is forgiven?
what the fuck? fuck that
jk chapter 9 . 1/7/2016
LOL so Edward made bella a whore cause she wasn't a whore? oh that makes perfect sense! Edward can just die already seriously.

by the way your grammar is fuckin horrible
dpennell007 chapter 18 . 9/27/2015
I loved your fast moving story! A strong, powerful Eadward with an initially resistant Bella overcoming obstacles together is always a plus in my book.

Hopefully you will receive a refresher course in grammar as part of your university studies. There were small repeated mistakes such as one of your characters being deaf instead of dead, but not enough to take away the flow of your story. Thank you for sharing, and I hope you continue to write.
Guest chapter 18 . 9/10/2015
Wow super I loved the story.. I really liked it... It was the perfect lenght... Big fan
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