|Reviews for End of the Line|
| kw chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Oooohhhhhh...the 1st chapter is sooo good !
| sherry57 chapter 21 . 8/26/2013
Great story hon. Wonderful last chapter. I loved the little conversation with Kate...poignant and so like they were together. Gibbs going round the various sick beds...funny but so him taking care of his own. Tony really is like a son to him. Glad John got settled and in touch with his daughter.
Great story hon...I really enjoyed it. So what's next on the cards?
| Trekkieb chapter 21 . 8/19/2013
I really enjoyed reading your story! It was really well-rounded, with a solid plot and lots of drama/angst all rolled up into one. Good job!
| Chibi-Onee-chan chapter 21 . 8/18/2013
I definitely loved this story a lot! It had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. The characters were written perfectly and the plot was nicely done. Awesome work :3
| guest chapter 21 . 8/9/2013
I 'm sorry to have come to the end of this thoroughly engrossing story which I could barely put down. I loved the way all of the team members were written, especially Tony and Gibbs. And it 's always a plus to have an actual case and plot. You gave us a great read. Thank you! Best wishes from a reader in the USA!
| SharonE68 chapter 21 . 8/9/2013
EXCELLENT JOB...ILOVED IT. Your story grabbed my attention from the beginning and held tight.
I wanted, I needed to know what came next. The vivid description of Tony's torture was heartbreaking but we both survived and that's really what its all about. Thanking for sharing.
| newgal chapter 21 . 8/8/2013
| HardyGal chapter 21 . 8/7/2013
Aw, man… Poor McGee. When Tim was a kid, he made a fantastic birthday card for his dad, using every arts-n-crafts thing he could get his hands on. When he gave it to him, Tim's dad promptly gave it back, saying, 'You can do better. Try again.' I think you know all this, but it was I'm season 9 episode The Penelope Papers.
Yay! Tony is alright! Fantastic story! Absolutely terrific! I'm going to cry again, but awesome fanfiction right here!
| HardyGal chapter 19 . 8/7/2013
| HardyGal chapter 17 . 8/7/2013
Yay! Go, Ziva! (I'm partial to The Next Generation myself).
Oh, my gosh, Kate! I'd forgotten about her! (I haven't seen man season ten episodes unfortunately, and the one where Kate the goldfish is introduced is amongst the ones I haven't watched; all the same, I know about her).
| HardyGal chapter 14 . 8/7/2013
-dramatic hand movements- 'NO! NOT KATE! NOT KATE! DON'T ASK ABOUT KATE!' …Literally my reaction…
I dot know why, but I'm glad you call McGee 'Tim' a lot. Ah, McGoo… one name in about seventy five…
| HardyGal chapter 13 . 8/7/2013
Tony and Gibbs… Gibbs is by far a better father than DiNozzo Senior… Get better, Tony…
| HardyGal chapter 12 . 8/7/2013
I'm starting to cry again… Go see Tony, Gibbs!
| HardyGal chapter 11 . 8/7/2013
I can imagine the scene, and I'm freaking out…
| HardyGal chapter 9 . 8/7/2013
It was mentioned in one episode that Tony was infected by something deadly, but when was that?