Reviews for End of the Line
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Oh... My... God! That was intense! Poor Tony! It was funny that he fell down the stairs though! :D
TheNaggingCube chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Oh my another wonderful story from the double J!

Oh Tony what have you walked into and will the lovely Carla find out and help you?
mikiss chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Great start, hope you update quickly.
tansysam chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
great start, i can imagine tony falling down the stairs. more please.
Sam-Jo2013 chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
I loved, loved, loved, loved, LOVED your last NCIS fic, and this one seems to be takin' an iron grip on my mind/heart too. Your use of literary techniques (diction, sentence structure, POV, etc) left little to almost no room for nit-pickin'. In fact, I cannot even recall if there was any errors; it was that good. Haha, needless to say I am lookin' forward to an update soon :
sherry57 chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Great start pet! I'm I always am with your stories. I'm looking forward to following the ride you're taking Tony on. Is it Mario who has set him up as the annoyed Father, or is Mario in cahoots with the baddies or is it someone else altogether?
Will be ready for the next chapter to see if we find out anything? Poor Tony, whumped already...hehehe, wicked laugh!
shadocat chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Good start! Looking forward to an update. Loved your last NCIS story.
BookEmDanno50 chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Loved this chapter and poor Tony..can't wait for the next chapter.
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