Reviews for End of the Line
HardyGal chapter 8 . 8/7/2013
Gibbs is the father. Tony is the irritating older brother. McGee is the awkward middle kid. Ziva is the defiant younger sister. Abby is the doting and doted on little sister. One, big, happy family…
Oh, Tony…
HardyGal chapter 5 . 8/7/2013
Holy crap, amnesia… Holy crap, amnesia…! HOLY CRAP, AMNESIA!
I'm crying with Abby… Dang it, just like her, I wear my heart on my sleeve, and even fanfictions can stab it…
HardyGal chapter 4 . 8/7/2013
'Argh! Vance!' 'Holy crap, the docks!' 'Find Tony!' 'He was there!' This is literally me through the entire thing. I feel like I'm watching an actual episode, complete with blackouts… By the way, the thorough forensics spoken by Dycky were impressive. You sure know a lot. Training or a lot of CSI, NCIS and whatnot?
HardyGal chapter 3 . 8/7/2013
Ok, has Tony ever been hurt THIS bad? I don't know…
HardyGal chapter 2 . 8/7/2013
Holy crap…! Tony!
So typical of him to be throwing smart remarks, even in that situation. I think he did a bit of that when he got the crap beaten out of him in UnderCovers (season, I have no idea). Thanks for the typical Tony movie reference; made my day.
HardyGal chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
WHOO! This looks like a start to a good fanfiction! Typical Tony trouble! I'm glad you got the personalities down!
It's so weird reading the words in the exact voices of the characters. But so awesome.
As a random side note, Tony is number three on my NCIS character favorites, Abby placing first (which was a real no brainer, even though my favorite characters are generally the guys), and McGee placing second.
guest chapter 8 . 8/7/2013
I 'm not the best reviewer -I usually review at the end of a story that I felt was exceptionally good. I'm not yet halfway through this one yet but it has captured my attention to say the least. I am going through a difficult thing at the moment and it really helps to be able to have a great story to turn to and get my mind off my troubles for awhile. Thank you for sharing. A reader in the USA.
FlamMabel chapter 21 . 8/7/2013
That was a great story. Sorry I didn't get a chance to review each chapter, but I was away camping when you finished the last chapters of your work. So I got to read it all at once! :)

Very well done, and I felt like I was watching an episode as I read the rest of your story. Glad all's well again, and Tony's life can get back on track.
shadocat chapter 21 . 8/6/2013
Awesome story! Thank you! :)
Meilea2010 chapter 21 . 8/6/2013
Fantasttic chapter/story. Really enjoyed it. Sorry to see it end.
zerolikesice chapter 21 . 8/6/2013
Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed reading this! Engaging, suspenseful, and well-characterized. Nice work! I'll be looking forward to reading more of your writing in the future, and it will be great to go back and read this through from beginning to end now that it's complete. :)
AgentD.6 chapter 21 . 8/6/2013
Loved the story and the ending was great hope you plan a new story soon!
AgentD.6 chapter 20 . 8/6/2013
You do cliff hangers really well!
Guest chapter 21 . 8/6/2013
Sorry to see it end, but enjoyed the ending, Tony and Gibbs father and son, love it.
Madances chapter 21 . 8/6/2013
Thank you so much for finishing this story. I did like it. There are so many abandoned stories out there or just writers with busy lives and really slow updates. It was really nice to find more so quickly. Good work. Tracy
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