Reviews for Puella Magi Kaen Magica
J flood chapter 1 . 5/16/2017
I know you're trying your best but you're going into way too much detail lose most of the details and do a little more simpler ruining the story by Heavens so much detail it makes it very boring You Can Do Better Than This I Know It it's obvious you have talent so do better.
Tayah 123-9 chapter 14 . 10/23/2013
ha lol my dog is called sachi!
WoWMotherFan45 chapter 32 . 10/15/2013
Wow! That was good! I finished this in my math class. :p

Anyway I wanna PM you about an idea I had.
Rales Mckoy chapter 32 . 10/14/2013
I didn't expect the ending, I feel sorry for the girls and I wonder what our new demoness will do now. Loved the story, can't wait for the next!
Heavy Lok chapter 32 . 10/14/2013
Yukio...was *Insert spoiler here*?!
The story is over, the curtains closing and the black wings of one taking flight to the starry night.
WAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH! It's over! IT'S ALL OVER! I WANTED MORE! (Just like the show itself) Waaahhh!
Why am I even crying?! I'm a man! I'm...WAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!

Good. *Sniff*
Heavy Lok chapter 31 . 10/14/2013
This must be explosion season...BECAUSE EVERYONE KEEP BLOWING UP!

Despite the spelling mistakes, this story is just so decent to read.
One more chapter...and I'm done.
Oh, boy...
Heavy Lok chapter 30 . 10/14/2013
You...killed Sherrie mid-sentence?
Huh, never expected that.
Speaking of death, Holy COW! Two witches fighting against one another! Mad stuff right there!

So it comes down to this: Kaen, Yuri and Yukio versus the coming final boss.
The final chap-oh, wait, you have at least one more.
Losing. Strength. To. Continue.
Must. Finish. STORY!
Heavy Lok chapter 29 . 10/14/2013
You did it!
You granted my request!
You killed my Stella! AND IT WAS BEAUTIFUL!
I'm practically crying here...!

Oh, and the witch died. Yeah, that happened.
Heavy Lok chapter 28 . 10/14/2013
Out of everything in this chapter, the poem was the only one that stood out as good.
Guess it's because it's the first poem I've ever read.
Heavy Lok chapter 27 . 10/14/2013
Mmm, I can almost taste the sweet sensation of defeat!
So Miku went out with a bang. A hero's death.

My goodness, everyone is getting killed off one after another. I can only guess who the next victim may be.
Onward to chapter 28!
Heavy Lok chapter 26 . 10/14/2013
Oh, man! Mami's witch form! Didn't expect to show up.
What's this? One saying their finisher line within the mind while another performs the kill? I'll admit, that was actually pretty good.

Overall, good chapter.
On with the rest! Oh boy, this is gonna take awhile.
Heavy Lok chapter 25 . 10/14/2013
What the-?!
You've finished ALL the remaining chapters?!
Definitely took me by surprise. Okay, let's review!

I absolutely have nothing to comment on for this chapter.
Eh, moving on, I suppose.
Rales Mckoy chapter 24 . 10/12/2013
Looks like their fates are sealed...or are they. The real question is, will they stay strong or will the suffer. Till the next chapter.
Heavy Lok chapter 24 . 10/11/2013
Oooooohhhhhhhhhh, Sherrie's gonna kick the bucket!
Or is it Stella that will drop-dead first?
Either way, one will die will die. Yeah...

You're almost there to the end, Author! Don't give up!
Heavy Lok chapter 23 . 10/11/2013
Oh, hey! Another pair of chapters! Time to dive once more!
*Finish reading*
This is how you kill off Asuna? By committing suicide? That's pretty low.
No battle...
No struggle...
Just the mind of one seeking shattering the soul.
So much for potential awesome. I'm certain that SAO fan who created this character will be quite disappointed. Unless, he/she was the one who commissioned this death. I doubt that, though.

And I just noticed her sister is called 'Sachi', just like Sachi from SAO. Damn, I'm slow.
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