|Reviews for Shadow on the Wall|
| The King in White chapter 2 . 10/19
A touch rough, but an interesting realistic adaption of the story.
Just a note about the Bible and Ente Isla. "Satan" is explicitly stated to be a common as dirt name amongst demons. So claiming the Bible is about Satan Jacob/Maou Sadao would be like claiming that the dude down the street named Mark wrote the Gospel of Mark. Not to mention that Sadao is only 300 years old - the Bible predates him by a few thousand years. So I'd write out any references to it as being a serious part of the story since it doesn't jive with canon info.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 8 . 8/3
Okay, I thought I had posted this... Apparently not... What's wrong with my iPad? Ah well they say better late than never.
*cries* damn I hoped for an update... And I'm even guilty of skipping my sleep because I became addicted to your story! It's so awesome! I'm glad that you're still busy with reciting and stuff if you need suggestions or help, I'll be glad to help out a fellow writer.
Now a small rant about how much I love your stories, how great the characterisation is, the past you came up with for Maou! Emi's situation. She's dealing with it quite well. No depression about the fact that people even those she trusted call her an abomination, not concluding that her mother may have abandoned her and such.
Still curious what Emi will do now. Uh curious curious curious and don't cut yourself short. I've read milions of stories so also all kinds of writing and I gotta say your writing isn't messy or terrible. It's so detailed, which is what I love! I'm still curious about the plot and of course the development of Maou and Emi's relationship, (my whippings feels are seriously all over the place!) which in my eyes seems to be going good! Love their interactions their development and all. Also how Maou became attracted to Emi is priceless. Well, we know that the only battle we'll get from those two in the future is a lover's squarel. XD too bad for Maou. Then again he'll probably gets something better for it in return. :)
I can't wait till he tries to impress her. That would be so awesome and Emi then being all reluctantly, getting annoyed. The worse part for her is that he became her roommate against her will. XD
I'll wait patiently till the update and rewrite and if you ever need any help, I'll be happy to give suggestions. :)
| Blond Dude 42 chapter 8 . 7/6
Really nice story. For a first fic this is really good.
I just started looking at this archive after binge watching the show on Netflix. This is definitely the kind of story I wanted to see.
Please update soon. I can't wait for more.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 7 . 7/5
you sir are a genius, every chapter sucks me in! It's getting better and better! I can't believe he actually did that in his sleep, becoming all clingy to Emi! Poor girl couldn't even escape and had to face the fear of thinking that her first kiss would be stolen by her arch nemesis. XD
I wonder, how is it possible for are I to see into Maou's past? Has it something to do with her powers? Or is Maou doing it subconsciously? Or is it some,thing else?
Wow so Emi's hate for Maou will be put out quickly... What does it mean for Emi? Will she stop her assaults on Maou? Will she stop being a hero? What will be her next resolve, since her only goal in her life disappeared.
Of course, it's always that damn church. They are so evil! I pity Emilia.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 6 . 7/5
Love it love it love it! This is the best
Story ever! Kay we have the start of Maou's love for Emi and now he also lives with her?, ah my fangirl squeals can't tolerate this! Kyaaaaaaaaaaaa! This will be so much easier for when Alas Ramus. Appears!
I love long chapters you have seriously satisfied me in each way possible with this. Chapter! The fighting scenes, the conversations, the character development and especially the shipping feels!
I hope you're still working on this story because this is diamonds! No even more valuable than diamonds!
I love it so much!
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 5 . 7/5
Holy damn! This is so getting better and better! Kayak for the little ship teasing moments! Maou and Emi understand each other a bit more yes yes yes! And ahh yes are I is pretty, I guess she takes after her mom and don't worry girl, your grow within the years. At least in the last light novels Emi looks very pretty and she has gotten more curves, so she shouldn't cry much. XD
I was so hyped you've done Chiho's dream sequence perfect! Seriously I was so drawn into it! And Emi's dream gave me so many feels. She has suffered so much and her existence is quite sad, since the Angels see her as an abomination. :(
Yes Kucifer appeared! A fight will bound to happen and Orba is probably not far away. Is Maou seriously going to kill that slack off? That lazy fallen angel is not even worth killing. XS
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 4 . 7/5
Another amazing chapter! Love how you played out the date! Those tease of Maou never cease to entertain me. XD
Alciel made me crack up so hard with his comment, Maou is far above Emi. Hahahaha! Priceless and Emilia's reaction. Lols.
I think the red miasma and all longs to Maou and his supposed housewife.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 3 . 7/5
Wow that came out quickly, ah but couldn't Emi tell him herself? Or was she not aware of it in this story?
Seriously I love the teasing. poor Emi, but my fangirl squeals refuse to stop! Seriously, you ask for her panty colours?! Emi next time say you're not wearing any. XD best way to shut a guy up.
Haha yay for the lovers quarrel joke!
Btw, will Alas Ramus appear in this story? I hope so! She's adorable and I'd want to see Maou and Emilia playing house! Which will probably be harder than in the novels!
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 2 . 7/5
Wow I like this idea and route. Maou, despite a ting like the funny got in the light Novel, manga and anime, but just to hide his real persona and for his future plans.
God he has already shown interest in Emi without knowing that she's the Nephilim hero who wants his head. I guess it's pretty problematic for him when his archenemy is a half reed with a long lifespan. But in terms of relationship it's ideal, since he also ages slow!
And such a great way to end the chapter haha!i wonder if he's going to take back what he thought, XD
| IarIz chapter 6 . 6/12
Have i ever tell how awesome this chapter ris.. and how awesome you re for writing this xD i certailt hope this fic s not dead.
| VolticDesolation chapter 6 . 6/11
Good job with the fighting scene, especially when Maou sent the priest to hell. I couldn't help but grin seeing that Maou is living with Emilia.
| VolticDesolation chapter 5 . 6/11
Well, that chapter was a huge escalation from the previous ones. Honestly the dreams from Chiho were what baffled me the most, at least their meaning did.
| VolticDesolation chapter 1 . 6/11
Glad to find a story after my own heart. I can't wait to see this plays out with the Devil keeping his personality in the Human World. Keep up the good work!
| dragonfox123 chapter 8 . 4/10
Great plot and chapter
| Getsunohimesama chapter 4 . 3/29
God, the taunting between Emi and Maou is always welcome, though it IS a bit unfair on Maou's part to use his telepathic powers on Emi's mind. You'd think that the Church would've taught her how to protect herself from that one. After all she IS the Hero!
Haha, Alciel truly is just like a housewife. An OLD housewife. XD
Just a little mistake there, Emilia knew from her father that she was part angel. Normally, she wpuld know all about Nephilim from her training, though I guess you may have left it like that for the story's purposes...?