Reviews for Immortal
Ann chapter 1 . 10/19/2016
Very good and Very sad... *crying*

I feel so sad over Legolas and Arwen... I think for them there was never an option... both would have died of Heartbreak soon after the last one of their loved ones die. Be that Aragorn, or Hobbits, or Gimli...
I simply cannot see Legolas continuing his life after such grief. In my verse of realistic ultimate end of their story I see Legolas following Gimli to his death in valinor...
And afterlife meeting of the Fellowship of course ... hahaha
Angel of Light chapter 1 . 10/19/2016
You brought me to tears. or more precisely a river of tears. I cannot imagine what it would feel like to actually out live everyone and watch all. my loved ones die. It is a heavy and heartbreaking fate.
And you wrote it expertly
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TimeturnerJay chapter 1 . 8/18/2016
This is breaking my heart.c
occasionallywrite chapter 1 . 7/12/2016
So beautiful and heart-breaking.
Rachelle Lo chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
How beautiful. I love to think that this would be how the story drew to a close.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
But then suddenly Legolas awoke, his eyes snapping open. He was in the elf kingdom, in his room.
"Legolas!" A voice yelled. Legolas sat up and almost burst into tears there and then. There, standing in the doorway were the grinning faces of Merry and Pippin, the light of the morning sun behind them. Pippin, despite his smile, looked concerned.
"You were having a nightmare, are you alright?"
Legolas, reality hitting him like a cushion, recalled the date. It was barely a year after the defeat of Sauroman. Frodo and Gandalf had left for the undying lands a month prior and the two hobbits were visiting. Legolas breathed a sigh of heartfelt relief, it was all just a dream.
"Never felt better my young friends!" He said leapin out of bed and racing over to the two child-sized Hobbits, embracing them in joy that they were still young, deaths grasp still far far away from them.
"What's for breakfast?" Pippin asked Merry
"Pancakes" Merry told him
"And second breakfast?"
"Pippin!"
"What?"
Blue Eyed Pyro chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
WHY DID YOU MAKE ME FEEL THESE FEELINGS? D:

It HURTS.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
saaaaad.
and sweet.

That's how it should end.
Thank you for writing it
BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
A great story. Very well written.
WaffleNinja chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
I love this story. It is so tragic, and such a kind thing that Merry and Pippin would definitely see done. There are plenty of stories documenting Legolas' grief over Gimli and Aragorn's mortality, so this hobbit-centric version was satisfying.

Best lines that tug at my heart: "He was so proud to have been able to be companions with Legolas, for to him Legolas was not just one of the Fair Folk, he was the best of them."
titpuce86 chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
It was so sad I almost began to cry. It is very well written and there is a great characterization of the three of them. I like the little interlude between Legolas and Arwen at the end, for even if she'll die a mortal death, she'll first see her loved one die. Poor her and poor elves...
The Pearl Maiden chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
Ai! The Angst! The Angst! Poor Legolas. :(

Nice piece! :)
Majestik Moose chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Aw! That is so adorable for Merry and Pippin to be so concerned for Legolas. _ Just warmed my heart!

Great job!
Shadowed Night Sky chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
Sad, beautiful, and genius. I loved it!
the black leopard chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
Oh wow, this is a masterfully written tearjerker. Wonderful job writing a story that captures a touching moment dealing with hard issues. Thank you.
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