Reviews for She Can't Hear You If You Yell
Ein85 chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
You wrote that very well. You had a good handle on their voices. The sex scene was well written not too graphic, and perfectly believable. I have always thought there was a little more going on with these two than met the eye. All and all you rock! Keep up the good work! _
Armenius chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
I expected a depressing ending but it actually went well for them both.
You wrote it perfectly though. I recognised the tone of their voices through your writing and dialogues. You really respected Trent's personnality from the start till the end. Very nice to read.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
Really?!
Masato Nakajima chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
Great story
Trent has to be immune to all the bad, for Janes sake and his own, it helps when you have someone to be strong for.
as for banging your sister I have an open mind, just don't have kids because you're pissing in the gene pool then.