|Reviews for Define 'Wrong'|
| AK-4142 chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Absolutely wonderful! You captured their dynamic so well that I 'heard' the words in their voices in my head.
| SixBrokenSteps chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
To be honest, I loved this much more than I originally thought I would have going in. Really entertaining read. Short and sweet in a neat package. It's like a small nugget of humour and entertainment condensed. You should make more nuggets and share them with the people.
| Forgot password chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
Ugh, this was fantastic. You managed to capture their speech patterns, mannerisms, and personalities perfectly, and through only dialogue no less! I doubt the Bioshock writers could have covered this topic better than you did. The "I know you know" bit was very amusing. Great read, I love it!