|Reviews for Responsibility|
| Rose Princess chapter 9 . 5/11
Please continue! I love it!:)
| Queenies chapter 9 . 9/16/2014
This story is really interesting plz continue
| Hannah chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
This story plot is very similar to TrunksxPanLoverDBGT4love's the little pink diary why is that so, cause I also believe that she began that fanfic before you hmmmmmmm isn't that interesting
Ps. This is boring compared to hers
| CBear chapter 10 . 1/16/2014
YOU CANT END WITH GOTEN SMUT GODDAMIT. THEYRE TOO YOUNG NOO! Anyways, I really love this story. Please, continue? I'll give you red velvet cupcakes? :)
| MarronChestnut chapter 10 . 1/15/2014
Again hope you feel better have a nice day
| Writer'sFantasy chapter 10 . 1/15/2014
Guuuuyyyyyy Please get better don't let them haters bring you down from that high horse!
| Grrrrr chapter 10 . 1/15/2014
I really like this I hope you feel better
| HerosReprise chapter 9 . 12/5/2013
;) very sexy... *fans self*
Those two are sexy together.
But I had to laugh at the end. I can picture Goten being dumb enough to forget.
(Go on the pill Valese)
Oh man, I don't know whether I want her to be pregnant or not. Hmmmmmm.
Anyway, I'm finally caught up, aha I hope you enjoy getting 8 reviews at once lol.
Now please update for me! Xoxox
Well done with this fic so far
| HerosReprise chapter 8 . 12/5/2013
Nooooooo, stupid Isabelle!
Aha vegeta will take out all the paps.
Marron and Trunks are getting cuter.
And yay! Valese is stepping up, I like that.
| HerosReprise chapter 7 . 12/5/2013
The present. The kiss.
TATE mcCutiepie Briefs is my favourite character
| HerosReprise chapter 6 . 12/5/2013
Ah aha, the Yamcha bit at the start was funny!
Lol, so smutty. I went to a very strict private Christian school, where this kind of activity would never occur in a blue moon which makes it so much more funny to me ahahanahaha.
Sooo uncalled for Bulla! You psycho!
Poor Tate getting punched and Rayne almost choking.
Looking forward to her 18th...
| HerosReprise chapter 5 . 12/5/2013
*squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeal* THERES KISSING UP IN HERE! Omgomgomgomgomgomgomg... Love Trumar!
Ok, now that that's been said... *catches breath*
Goten and Trunks on baby patrol was funny. I'd LOVEit if you did the same at some stage of Vegeta and Goku having to look after their grandchildren. That'd probably be just as good.
Valese is overreacting
Bulla is also overreacting
These girls are obviously on their periods...
Hopefully Valese realises she needs to step up though before she loses Goten.
I'm not sure if your wanting to make it a Broten pairing, it could go either way at this point. But I do like Valese...
May favourite part:
The phone call where Marron was moaning and Trunks misunderstood. Ahaha! Funny, but cute that he was jealous/protective.
Writing is funny, I'm kicking myself for not reading this fic earlier. Did I say that yet?
| HerosReprise chapter 4 . 12/5/2013
Veggie and Gogo... Perfect! Had me laughing :) aha.
I like that Marrons all jealous, but I'd have loved to see more conversation between the two. 'Thirsty bitch' aha that's a good one.
Tate is a cutie!
| HerosReprise chapter 3 . 12/5/2013
Well done Brii on the Trumar part.
I liked the horseplay, how he carried her over his shoulder.
The Son family part was great.
Aha Goku! Doing the 'nasty' LMAO!
| HerosReprise chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
Ahahaha! Aw man, I should have read this ages ago.
Ms Blaire is Cray-Cray.
I'm excited to see GotenxValese here
I love ValTen, I mean I love Broten too, but I really get excited when I see Valten story's that are good.. (Rarely)
I'll read the rest!