Reviews for The Forbidden Fruit
AnonymouseXD chapter 9 . 1/24
Hiya! Now, I don't want to sound rude, impatient or pushy while saying this but is this fanfic going to be continued? Because it hasn't been updated in a long while and I was just wondering whether you've discontinued it or are just going through a mental block or you're too busy, etcetera. Because it'd be a real shame if this didn't get continued. It's an amazing Fanfiction and, as I can see from the reviews, it has tons of loyal readers. I hope it is still being updated because I love this and I love your character portrayals so much! :D
TfallingangelT chapter 9 . 11/26/2015
This is a great story. Alois is so bipolar but I kind of hope he becomes more stable. You should update
Guest chapter 5 . 11/14/2015
Cool story Idk vampire was gonna be in it why didn't she just tell her brother she don't want to go over to alois house that what I would have done
Tamami-Chan chapter 9 . 7/25/2015
Good chapter. I did not expect Alois brought to that "invited" to the mansion haha
I had to read the story again, I love it!
Hopefully you update soon! You have me intrigued.
Bye!
MonaTheGreat chapter 9 . 7/20/2015
I loved it, you really have his character down, an ass. haha. I'm really liking your OC and I wonder how Ciel will react to hear she is living at Alois' house.
Gracexxxx chapter 9 . 7/3/2015
Omg please update this. It's soooooo good!
Lady Phantomhive chapter 9 . 7/2/2015
OMG please update this or I may just die. Please !
Thatweridone chapter 8 . 2/1/2015
Just got into this story- I hope you continue it. LOVE IT :)
Person3 chapter 8 . 1/17/2015
Countinue u f***ing b**** I am starting to like da plot and u do this!?
rhizz17 chapter 7 . 12/29/2014
Update more story please
Gloom Doom Girl chapter 2 . 12/15/2014
I just started this fic but let me tell you, I almost burst into tears of happy fangirling when you mentioned Blood Dupre and the Rainsworths'.
Shanny chapter 7 . 10/29/2014
Pls update! I really like your story! I even open my iPad every minute just to see if you updated alreadyTT
SHANNY24 chapter 7 . 8/30/2014
PLSS! UPDATE! I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY! (i even stayed up all night just to read this wonderful work of yours O.O)
Someone chapter 7 . 7/6/2014
Is Sebastian and the Phantomhive servants in this or no? And are both of Ciel's eyes blue in this, demon contract eyes, or demon? That information would be most helpful to understand. Of course, you can reveal it later on. I would just like to know...somehow that is hopefully soon. Please continue this amazing story! _
Ebee chapter 7 . 6/27/2014
I don't understand Blair's "condition". I reread and still haven't found it. Is it mentioned in one of the eariler chapters and I am being blind or is it to be announced later? But, either way it is excellant so far. With pairings of characters, I really don't care as long as it's good, but it's Ciel turned into a demon? I am probably over-thinking things because I am tired...And I should be going to bed...But I wanted to read something and this was it! I couldn't have picked better! (Unless I read one made by them if they were real, but that is VERY unlikely)
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