Reviews for The Forbidden Fruit
Gracexxxx chapter 9 . 7/3
Omg please update this. It's soooooo good!
Lady Phantomhive chapter 9 . 7/2
OMG please update this or I may just die. Please !
Delanieroberts14 chapter 8 . 2/1
Just got into this story- I hope you continue it. LOVE IT :)
Person3 chapter 8 . 1/17
Countinue u f***ing b**** I am starting to like da plot and u do this!?
rhizz17 chapter 7 . 12/29/2014
Update more story please
Gloom Doom Girl chapter 2 . 12/15/2014
I just started this fic but let me tell you, I almost burst into tears of happy fangirling when you mentioned Blood Dupre and the Rainsworths'.
Shanny chapter 7 . 10/29/2014
Pls update! I really like your story! I even open my iPad every minute just to see if you updated alreadyTT
SHANNY24 chapter 7 . 8/30/2014
PLSS! UPDATE! I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY! (i even stayed up all night just to read this wonderful work of yours O.O)
Someone chapter 7 . 7/6/2014
Is Sebastian and the Phantomhive servants in this or no? And are both of Ciel's eyes blue in this, demon contract eyes, or demon? That information would be most helpful to understand. Of course, you can reveal it later on. I would just like to know...somehow that is hopefully soon. Please continue this amazing story! _
Ebee chapter 7 . 6/27/2014
I don't understand Blair's "condition". I reread and still haven't found it. Is it mentioned in one of the eariler chapters and I am being blind or is it to be announced later? But, either way it is excellant so far. With pairings of characters, I really don't care as long as it's good, but it's Ciel turned into a demon? I am probably over-thinking things because I am tired...And I should be going to bed...But I wanted to read something and this was it! I couldn't have picked better! (Unless I read one made by them if they were real, but that is VERY unlikely)
I-hate-everyone-Friday chapter 7 . 5/27/2014
I don't know why, but I have the strangest feeling that Blood turned Blair into a vampire or something when he first saw her and the so-called "red liquid in her tea" is actually blood.
You said before, didn't u? That he's a vampire.
Also, it says that Blair was once frail and weak but then now she would feel dizzy and then suddenly fine.
These ALL point to one thing: VAMPIRE! BLAIR'S A VAMPIRRREEEEEEEEE!
Tamami-Chan chapter 7 . 5/25/2014
I really like your fanfiction! I started reading it just yesterday, when I had finished watching kuroshitsuji by the ova's. Alois is so ... bipolar .. But in this chapter is seen re helpless .. probably for the memories.
I hope to see the next chapter. And yes, I wanted it to be: OC x Alois x Ciel ...
But hey, I'll settle with Alois xD
I hope your next update! Sayonara!
Tamami-Chan chapter 6 . 5/25/2014
This chapter reminded me much to ova 6 (Well, sort of) of Kuroshitsuji.
The only thing I did not like is that Claude was looking at all . Still, accommodates Trancy twisted personality.
Well, I need a final chapter TnT Hopefully an update soon.
Tamami
Carolinefdq chapter 7 . 5/11/2014
Nice chapter!
I was wondering when you were planning to update the story. I was afraid you had abandoned it. I do understand how it must have been hard to when so many things are going on in your life.
I love that you showed Alois' vulnerable side. When I watched the anime, I felt for him, you know? Because he grew under different circumstances than Ciel. So I really enjoyed that you wrote that side of him because most stories portray him as this psycho, pervert, etc. (which he is). However, there is more to that.
Anyways, update soon!

-Caroline
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
Me: *sees summary* Well this sounds...
Me: *reads first line, eyes widen in delight* YAY ALOIS IN CHARACTER!
Me: *finishes flashback* awwwwwwwwwwwww
M'lady, you just earned a fav and follow
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